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Live On (Small Rhyme)

Postby The Next Episode » Oct 13th, '05, 10:45

My incite on life - writing is my passion,
The words that I write make me like an assassin,
Expect a reaction - inject like a vaccine,
Gain some 'attraction' - all words but no action

Yet no satisfaction for what I've become
My mind is now empty - my heart is now numb
I know where I'm from - it may be the slums
It's where my heart is - for what I've succumb

I have some problems, but I don't try to sheild it,
I try my best to attest, let the people feel it,
I don't try to conceal it - they relate, I reveal it
I may be slightly stressed but this is how I heal it

And one day I'll be gone, in the ground and withdrawn,
But I know I'll live on through my writings and songs,
I may not go along with this world I'm upon,
But at least I'll still know where I truly belong
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Postby HAYZI » Oct 13th, '05, 13:51

nice man
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Postby j_shady » Oct 13th, '05, 15:49

this is really good, wow
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"I never bow down, and never say doubt/To whom it may concern and whom so ever may try/i'm forever westside and the feather-weight dies/Tell em take ya best shot gon get yourself hot/cus I yelled Bankhead and you felt left out
I ain't mention yo name thats what all this bout"
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Postby xariuss » Oct 17th, '05, 00:24

nice work dude, i really like it
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Postby SlurveBaller66 » Oct 25th, '05, 04:32

nice. make more. i enjoy it. keep it up
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