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Battle rhyme Game (no poetry, just pure hate rhymes)

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Postby Vettori » Aug 25th, '05, 05:10

Well, hmm, lets see I'm the king of writing lies,
"Rhymes and poetry spell rap"
I give you credit you tried
But in order to phase me, you need to be real too,
Cause you lied outta ur teeth again,I'm not working fast foods,
I'm simply just working on you, and you alone,
SO I suggest after all you said Go pick up ur phone,
Call 1.800 Crime stoppers, Cause im gonna be wanted,
Ill come cut off ur legs, like leather face he would want it,
I'm really surprised at what yu had to attack me with,
You try feeding off me in one day thats all you did?
A bunch of crap about dr. suess and goin to brazil?
And how I work on fryin pork on God damn grill,
It's not surprising i'm sorry i lied again,
Maybe i should use rhmyes yu use, like "Ima hit yu with a frying pan"
No fuck that back on track, simply whak, You fuckin suck balls sac,
What car did you say you have,
Oh thats right you didnt so keep ur fuckin lips sealed,
What was that earlier, are the wounds from earlier healed,
You said no ones ever made yu cry not even yur granny who's dead,
Man you must be mentally fucked in the head,
I noticed that too, all you can say is shit like,
Wheres yur head at, Yur dumb, ( it's obvius you just dont wanna fight)
(Dragon)"Man yur stupid, I can spit at yu the abc's"
How many times have i used that againstt you, Ill put that on ease,
Bitch please, next time you stand up to battle me proudly,
Get ready to be HEADSPRUNG, and I can say that Loudly,
I can never tell weather yur shit is fact or fiction,
But please go back inside yur mom to the fetal position.
You honestly don't Rap good, you don't no what yur missin
Cause so far too beat me, It's clear that uve failed this mission

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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 25th, '05, 06:31

aye, i have a really bad nose bleed right now, i'll respond when my fuckin nose stops bleedin, im bendin my head backwards right now and i cant really think of verses in this position. so dont think of this as me backin out cuz im comin back. i just feel really light headed right now.
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yo

Postby Vettori » Aug 25th, '05, 16:09

No man it's cool I understand,And yo props on this battle already, Im havin tons of fun wif it, And yo Keep it up, But when should we stop, So we can let people vote on who wins?
lolz im just curius, But yo I hope ur noseblees goes away bro, Take it easy

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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 26th, '05, 01:54

want to stop it already? we battled like 2 pages almost
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Aight

Postby Vettori » Aug 26th, '05, 03:32

Sounds good to me, And yo u see that poll, wher darjan spit at me like wtf,
I aint no pussy, but i finally met my match, "but i have this utter feelin it aint his, possibly a friend wrote it, comparing it to all his other shit, lolz
But yo, I hate to dissapoint anyone, But i need to be thinkin about my songs now, so battlins done for me, and darjan, aight you deserve that win, I wont fight it, that was good, it got me thinkin, but not hard enuff, Ima chek on the posts every now and then, post some songs, and talk to my boy fordy and v-dog, and dragonzedge now,
ill think about battlin again, just i need to get back on track,
Sorry to dissapoint anyone, It makes me feel like a pussy statin all this
But at least i can say it,
Ill be back,

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Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 26th, '05, 03:37

yea, i need to get back on track too, i need to make a Demo and i need to make one fast. My sister's friend is goin to Ohio to work for a label, and my sister is gonna pull me some strings since the her friend is friends with the person who is runnin it. and this might be my chance to shine and its in my reach
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Yo

Postby Vettori » Aug 26th, '05, 16:55

What city you live in?,
You got connections, to a label?
WOW buds,

And and sorry for the dissapointments to all, But as i said, i need to work on my songs again,I could have spit back to darjan i guess, but that would consist of wasiting time, I liked his, he's improving,
But yo, ima miss you all, ill come on every now and then to see whats up, Fordy v-dog, if i get back into battling after, i make a couple songs and a demo, Ill See if i can meet up against yur too's expectations, and levels,
But again im out, peace
At this moment, battling aint my thing

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ayo

Postby Vettori » Sep 26th, '05, 04:46

I loved this battle, But ima hold up on the battling like i said

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Postby Coccoa » Sep 30th, '05, 17:50

Yeah its cool. Keep it up. Even tho i think this should be moved to the Rap Battles
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 30th, '05, 17:51

Em_Young wrote:Yeah its cool. Keep it up. Even tho i think this should be moved to the Rap Battles



this is where people wud spit before rap battles was made
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 30th, '05, 18:36

Didnt knew about that. New here :roll:
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Postby 4D » Oct 1st, '05, 16:13

Em_Young wrote:Yeah its cool. Keep it up. Even tho i think this should be moved to the Rap Battles


It is true what Hayzi said, although I agree with Em young, move this baby to Rap Battles TR.
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Postby xariuss » Oct 19th, '05, 14:14

Everybody spill it, 6lines while grillin
so high that i'm confusing the floor with the ceilin
pull you skin back
i been phat, look at your rhymes, already seen that
up to the 5th line
and i didn't need college to know that your bitchs diein..
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Postby HAYZI » Oct 19th, '05, 14:28

this is months old xarrius, theres a new one in rap battles
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