keystyle pt.2

by **Just Silver** » Dec 18th, '13, 00:47

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Walked into the bank with an oxygen tank
Lit a match or get the cash you can die in a blink
Of an eye. . Plus I gotta a D.U.I to the safe house I arrive
I count the currency currently at a hundred gs it's certainly
Hard work when everyday is a public emergency
The public enemy uzi drippin shells on the concrete
Shoutout to the members that love me and my song sheets
Well shit It's been a long day especially from robbin banks
Your popping blanks I'm full lead I can lose your faith
Lose your face chin uppercut like a razor blade
From day to day back to extort stores that pay
Presidential masks like I'm cliche
Clinton with the briefcase smoke till the leaf is waste
Leave the scene or be afraid actors get slapped up
Harder than a mack truck I'm cooler than the back of a bus
You at it or what I really ain't sure
Shout out to Canadapure . Big ray I could say a couple more
Vicious spit raptor type quickness sharp talon tipped shit
The rapper that changes subjects in an instant
And somehow you still stay interested
Right now sitting in my room thinking about death
What happens next after all these checks
I wish I was the robbers I portrayed or jose
In my last piece you should read it's pretty deep
In detail im a Fox tail your a sea snail
My rap always prevails treat her like Jesus and get her nailed

by **shadyblogger** » Dec 18th, '13, 01:46

Haha. I liked the flow throughout the beginning-middle. I felt like it started to lose momentum towards the end but the last few lines were pretty funny. I like all the rhyming and flow going on. It's pretty dope man.

by **Just Silver** » Dec 18th, '13, 02:03

Thanks guy I got like an inspiration wave goin on lately

by **Francesco** » Dec 18th, '13, 02:12

Nice rhymes & flow homie... nice shouties too. :y:

by **Just Silver** » Dec 18th, '13, 02:13

Thanks guy

by **Francesco** » Dec 18th, '13, 02:18

Just Silver wrote:Thanks guy

No problem... I've lost count of your pieces to be honest. You've been super active writing for like at least 6 months or so. :y:

by **Just Silver** » Dec 19th, '13, 02:21

Bump

by **CanadaPure** » Dec 19th, '13, 02:24

Shout out to Canadapure . Big ray I could say a couple more

Shouts back homie! Your shit is kinda getting eclipsed atm

by **Just Silver** » Dec 19th, '13, 02:35

I know lol I just gotta keep writing

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