Flowvention. 2014

[Just Silver]

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Let's start a new edition of linguistics and rhythm
Fresh as tic tacs the big fags skittles fruity and brittle
Spit flames that sizzle makem all feel my visual
In my actual dreams Krugers ruger.. you awaken in bloody sheets
Comfortably I flow over beats sailor to the wind
Your boat speed isn't close to me dock up im goin in
Ipod dock stuck cause you just downloaded him
He's so dope and low-key so you'll never notice him
Focus on me on the prize I unwrap in mind
Trying to shake myself loose and see what's inside
Open it up straight sickening infectious stay from distance
I recommend you diss him cause suicide could be a decision
Rope tied tighter than a freshman in prison when hes fucked
Never slipping or getting stuck just my essence of herbal buds
Accepted life as a downer crashed my plane in the mud
Worthless as fuck sex with Lincoln on the shiny coin
Pennies in her loins then came my birth as a boy
Shot guns as a toy playground straight destroyed
I'm playing around fictional sounds sound so choice
The warrior with words worried that the world's warped
Flipped itself lost humanity and went Corporate
Business bought out the music we were enjoying
So I went crazy new school wrote what I liked
Doing what I must just to win the fucking fight
Roll the dice life's a role are you rolling it right
If your stuck get at least a 7 in your life
Keep paying the whole night dice is snow bright
Your guys are snow white Disney movie crew
Look at you who do you think you are kid shit
Get to fitness before a swift fist is tailor made for the witness
That's you bitches a waste of life
Id stab you and shake hands with Satan twice
Then I ate your wife drank some Sprite sorry for last night
I was mad hyped my dick was harder than a crack pipe

[Just Silver]

Bump

[shadyblogger]

Damn this was one of your better ones imo. It started out intense to me and just kept going with like a hypnotizing flow. Some clever lines and wordplay densely packed in. Very good.

[Just Silver]

Thanks guy this was pretty much slept on but I'm looking forward to our collab as well as my new project

[Just Silver]

Last bump then new project

[LilWayneNorwayLove]

Hey i'm new on this forum and don't know how long u have been writhing, but this looked rly good to me. i'v thought about trying to write shit myself (i don't know shit about music tho) and have read a tonn of lyrices, like to learn somthing. and i find it funny, cuz this is better (my opinion) lyric/rhyme wise than much of what i have read by known artists. i can't point out anything, cuz u probably know a LOT more abut this than me. but it looked strong, and i could feel the flow when reading it, especially the second time (i'm not rly good at english, as u can se from my writhing, so had to read it 3 times just to understand it all lol)

[Just Silver]

Thanks so much guy and ya you just gotta practice its especially hard if English isn't your first language

But u can use this link as feedback and u can write a little something you'll get pointers and stuff from the tr community

[Francesco]

That was even better...

[Just Silver]

Lol thanks this one has less of a subject than my newest piece

[Francesco]

You've been a work horse for a while now so I'll keep supporting your shit homie... Anytime.

[Just Silver]

Time for something new

[Just Silver]

Extremely slept on gtta find a pen for my next project last bump