Introverted

[shadyblogger]

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Over the past few months I've tried coming up with shit
But that's just it
All the verses in my head have been shit
Thinking about this girl, man I could've had this bitch
But I let her go, damn am I a masochist?
I think I've been having issues
With my life so if you meet me in real life don't ask me this:
What have you been doing with your life the past six years?
Because I won't be able to fucking answer it
And if I answer it I'll probably answer it with some shitty response like "slapping bitches"
But in reality I've been snapping pictures
Of every shitty thing that goes on around me like car accidents
And the funny thing is all these happenings tend to happen when
You least expect it like when I saw some guy on the side of the road taking a massive shit
I looked him in the eye and called him a fa-aggot
He said "you're the one looking, now go mind your own damn business"
I guess you could say I say dumb shit and don't even apologize for half of it
It's like I ate a box of laxatives
But I'm shitting out the wrong end spilling all these adjectives
Brown, white, skinny, lean, to the fattest bitch
You've ever seen in your life better run for your life
Or go and grab a knife
While I go and stab your wife
Cuz I just don't give a fuck and I don't give a fuck
If this verse has a flow or rhymes
It's hard enough tryna keep up with the same damn rhyme scheme
But here I go, where am I?
I think I was gonna say when it comes to my beliefs, I'm so passionate
Because I've had it with all of this
And I'm sick of people asking if I prefer ass or tits
And I'm sick of people who can't take half of six
And I'm sick of people who don't know how to spell words like asterisk
And I'm sick of people who act like they're the shit when they haven't mastered shit
Not that I've mastered shit but I can at least admit that I haven't yet
And I'm a straight loner that's why I always choose the last urinal
Now I want you all to take a second to imagine this
I'm a cool guy that gets along with everyone, but I'm not
I'm introverted
And those insults, them don't hurt it just bounces off my shirt I
Barely feel em' anymore because now I've been assertive
Throwing punches and I intend to hurt ya
And if I intend to murder
I'll let you know I just wish I could've seen the verdict
Of my life now six years ago because I would've played things different
You know what I'm saying but I'm guilty, my hands are dirty
I'm a sick motherfucker, I'm akin to hearses
So into dark things like stabbing pins in horses
And hiding in my shell like a tinted tortoise
As I withdraw in to myself with each line and draw more in towards it
And I'd like to say a big fuck you to everyone who's reading this especially those who are extroverted
And from now on I think that's how I should end my verses

[mdemaz]

Bruh, I love the wordplay and structure. Flowed pretty good, for the most part. I gotta actually rap this in my head again to a different beat because this one isn't working.

Good work, doe.

[shadyblogger]

Bruh, I love the wordplay and structure. Flowed pretty good, for the most part. I gotta actually rap this in my head again to a different beat because this one isn't working.

Good work, doe.

Lol thanks for the feedback bro! Yeah I had some of the crappy beats Eminem rapped over (2005-2007) in my head as I wrote a lot of this. Oddly enough, I think it turned out ok. Thanks man

[shadyblogger]

Bump

[mdemaz]

You guys are really bad.

It takes like 2 minutes to read something like this...

[shadyblogger]

You guys are really bad.

It takes like 2 minutes to read something like this...

Hahaha thanks man. This is my longest piece yet...

Btw I listened to your first rant on the Mdemaz rants page and I liked it. Gonna listen to more soon

[shadyblogger]

this is a pretty dope piece, except for the violence directed at horses. don't make me write a diss track. remember what i did to silver?

lel it's good. nice rhyming and content.

Hahaha thanks bro. I just needed a word to rhyme there and horses came to mind. Nothing personal against you


Thanks for reading

[mdemaz]

Kay Slay finna produce the track.

[mdemaz]

WTF HORSE YOU JUST DETROYED THE UNIVERSE

[shadyblogger]

Horse, you crushed me

[Just Silver]

You least expect it like when I saw some guy on the side of the road taking a massive shitI looked him in the eye and called him a fa-aggotHe said "you're the one looking, now go mind your own damn business"

really liked this piece it started of strong although the line I just said threw me off a bit with flow and was random as hell lol

Otherwise I enjoyed it those "im sick of" lines flowed smooth as butter

Shits nice one of your best imo

[shadyblogger]

You least expect it like when I saw some guy on the side of the road taking a massive shitI looked him in the eye and called him a fa-aggotHe said "you're the one looking, now go mind your own damn business"

really liked this piece it started of strong although the line I just said threw me off a bit with flow and was random as hell lol

Otherwise I enjoyed it those "im sick of" lines flowed smooth as butter

Shits nice one of your best imo

Thanks man! Much appreciated.