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My new rhyme-4 everything

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My new rhyme-4 everything

Postby Darjan333 » Oct 22nd, '05, 21:32

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Whenever I do what I do-I am always lying-that
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Postby Darjan333 » Oct 23rd, '05, 06:59

Thanks for the support...... :8)
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Postby Tomega » Oct 23rd, '05, 10:47

ur flow is hot again mate
like the chorus very much
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Postby Darjan333 » Oct 23rd, '05, 10:49

Thanks,bro,i apreciate that very much! :D
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Postby xariuss » Oct 25th, '05, 08:12

Yeah nice work dude, i like it, keep going at it
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 25th, '05, 20:47

that was very good darjan
some of those lines had me really laughing :D
keep the rhymes comming
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I still rap better than you.

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Postby misa » Oct 25th, '05, 21:32

tht was good darjan keep it up :)
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