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Postby xariuss » Nov 8th, '05, 07:30

daddy no, why do you do this?
you said you loved mommy,
no don't burn all of the pictures
i'm in em to, don't you love me either?
Daddy, put the knife down, mom's really sorry
No daddy don't please don't hurt her
You said i was your acomplishment, and your about to murder

Have you ever witnised your dad grab a knife for
something he's throught well over
He grabs mom's wrist and it's all over
but no, no it's NOT yet all over
mom's friend walkin in screamin her lungs for
my mom while she's on her last quater
I've always been trapped in
i'm so confused at what had just happened
It's like every time i wake up there back together
this isn't right mom, you better leave now or never
run mom, like u said, light as a feather
i wouldn't hold anything above her
even though my dad's was a not right for her
i love em both,
no one can change blood to water.
It's respect and all in order .....

daddy no, wwhy do you do this?
you said you loved mommy,
no don't burn all of the pictures
i'm in em to, don't you love me either?
Daddy, put the knife down, mom's really sorry
No daddy don't please don't hurt her
You said i was your acomplishment, and your about to murder




ummm, i dont think it rhymes very well as in reading it, but i did it to a beat and it sounds quite good, by the way im a little high, and i needed to write this, so it might not make sense... but yeah peace out
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