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Postby 4play » Nov 8th, '05, 18:30

http://www.soundclick.com/krazedvisionary

gimme some feed pleeese peeps i'm new to thsi forum and wanna make some friends :)
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Postby trapd00r » Nov 8th, '05, 18:34

Kinda ok, man. :)
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Postby $0 R3@L » Nov 8th, '05, 22:11

yo 4play.....wats with the link cat? :unsure:
http://www.myspace.com/aronsoreal
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 8th, '05, 22:17

Ur ok.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Nov 8th, '05, 23:13

yeah your ok dude
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Postby 4play » Nov 11th, '05, 14:42

so nobody is gunna give me any real feed ?

wut could i do to improve lyricly ???
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 11th, '05, 17:44

Talk about guns, money, sex, women...everyday topics, you know. Fuck lyrics, say "sex sells" 10 times and you be fine.
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Postby Mmathers » Nov 13th, '05, 16:28

Em_Young wrote:Talk about guns, money, sex, women...everyday topics, you know. Fuck lyrics, say "sex sells" 10 times and you be fine.


Ha....
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 13th, '05, 16:30

Do i sence sarcasm Mathers?
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