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here....its like a month old

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Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 27th, '06, 00:47

patience son, its alright, keep it up
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 27th, '06, 04:31

structure: 10
flow: 7
vocabulary: 5
overall: 8

excellent stuff ,a great read.
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Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 27th, '06, 08:34

i say overall 5
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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