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Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 1st, '06, 21:52

aint u too damn old to battle
ur prolly growin mold so ya better skidaddle
oh, well i guess that ya have soul on the rap channels
my bad bro, i have no actual ammo to blast at this classic known rebel
but i bet that i can handle the level ur at and surpass you
and as a matter of fact i cant stand you
cuz ya act full of crap too
instead of using ya Cambell's as in noodle
so ill trash ur voodoo hex to cancel ur future tracks
who attract stupid guests n too ur future cuz u ruined past
users at their computer desks using masks to suit ya tasks
who are ya man, i'll sumo wrestle u and put u to rest
just do ur quest or ill refuse to back a few more steps
even if soon im at a huge building ledge ill resume combat against u:
offset, confused n wrecked cuz u are stressed
cuz u truly stretch the ruler- that means u are less of a superman
than i, a human am
ur a mutant pest, who just has a few regrets illumned ahead
like the bad news ya get about rumors left
n whats good is read when it consists of consumin bread
in ur raps to refuel ur rep
now ur neighborhood is mad....
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Postby Mc Cubz » Mar 1st, '06, 23:32

KdoG is dat aimed at any1
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Postby MuNxMuN » Mar 1st, '06, 23:33

Mc Cubz wrote:KdoG is dat aimed at any1


if it is i think i know who it's aimed at :shifty:
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Postby Mc Cubz » Mar 1st, '06, 23:44

ye who lol
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Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 2nd, '06, 09:46

naw, this aint aimed at ne 1 or i wouldve called someone out n addressed it
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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