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turned me blue

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 6th, '06, 02:02

the world turned me blue, its hurtin me too
but my journey resumes till im buried into a cemetery of tombs
im livin to carry my wounds but im preparing for doom
n im sharing my truth cuz i care for the youth
theres not nearly the room to spare any news of serious proofs
so im steering these routes induring apparent issues
and very soon ill disappear from my interior curfew
i got a series to do but i premeire with no crew
n clearly in view, there's terror n clues
now i know my errors are thru, all control i swear i will move
cuz i hear lots of foes in my ear n they're due
i see em in the mirror n its soon they'll be near my persuit
but to not fear them i choose
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Postby Rae » Mar 6th, '06, 17:10

Thats really good!!!
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Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 7th, '06, 05:34

ty angie help me get better b4 i leave tomorrow
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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