My Time Is Now

[Atone]

so i took my time with my next project, litterally started recording it about a year ago, but went into full on focus on this album about 6 months ago, the album is called "Welcome To My Nightmare", which is a darker toned album, it's going to be part of my "Dreams and Nightmares" series, after this album i am working on another album called "The Dream Catcher" which will show that anybody can overcome their nightmares, sort of like a split personality type series,

after that, i will be working on 1 final album, and then i'm taking a break from music for a little bit,

anyways, here is the song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oMySEAsuMBM



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[Eedee]

Are you using the same mic you've been using the past few years? The quality hasn't changed. And you're still excruciatingly off-beat. However, your lyrics and shit are nice. I like the messsage. Sounds like you don't have a pop filter either?

I will peep this album, however.

[Trimss]

Atone, you say you have a better job and shit.. Then please buy another microphone.

It's really hard to judge your songs with that horrible quality. Please, buy a 30 dollars microphone or something.

[Mr.DGAF]

I actually liked the opening. Quality aside, your flow sounds like you can work it acapella, got some nice lyrics too. Once the beat hits you are on beat for like 20 or 30 seconds then you take a pause and it fucks up. Like I said, the intro was on point flow wise so I know you know how to do that ish, it's gotta be a pacing issue or something. Just keep working on it dawg, shit will come together. I wasn't feeling the hook too much because again, that was around the time you really lost the flow. Got some work to do, could use a better mic, but there's some positive stuff in here.