Dilz & Eedee- "Wish Me Luck" (Mixtape)

[Eedee]

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http://dilzmusic.bandcamp.com/album/wish-me-luck


01. Time Bomb (Intro) (Duo)
02. Conversations (Duo)
03. Letter To My Life (Dilz)
04. I Found Ya (Eedee)
05. I Need To Get Away (Duo)
06. You'll Never Stop Me (Dilz)
07. When All Light Dies (Eedee)
08. A Million Tears (Duo)
09. Through The Window (Dilz)
10. If I Die Young (Duo)
11. I Give Myself To The Sea (Eedee)
12. Wish Me The Best (Outro) (Duo)

13. Virtue (Dilz ft. Eedee) (BONUS)
14. Diamonds (Dilz ft. Eedee) (Remix) (BONUS)
15. Butterflies (Eedee: Going Forward Snippet) (BONUS)

Listen and enjoy.

[FxTDilz]

where's the feedback guys?

[Mr.DGAF]

Gonna vibe to it now.

[FxTDilz]

Gonna vibe to it now.

Hope you enjoy it man lol

[Mr.DGAF]

Time Bomb
Dig the intro, I like dem birds yo. Cool atmosphere. The beat’s pretty nice altogether. I remember the story behind Eedee’s verse, at least I think I do haha. I dig your flow mane, the choice alive part is kinda ehhh, only complaint though. I’m feeling this verse man, it honestly helps a lot when I know what you are talking about before the verse hits.
Dilz’ verse is nice, you balled like a nutsack (hahahahha). I like that you came in when the beat gets real intense, felt like I was about to have to mosh or something. No complaints on the actual verse, your delivery still could use a little more edginess for this verse I think, but your flow is pretty damn good now. I kinda know about your verse too with the song with SwizZz so that’s cool yo.

Conversations
The beaaaaaaat OMG. The scheme Eedee brings to pass it off to Dilz is sick, and Dilz’ flow/scheme in return is fucking ridiculous. Honestly don’t think anything else in the track tops that first transition. Though I will say, DIlz goes in really hard on this song. Good delivery dude. I like the opra-tunity part hahaha. The dilz/eedee or eedee/dilz line doesn’t flow perfectly, but eh. The going back and forth in the end is cool because you guys complement each other quite well, both figuratively and literally haha. This is a good track to pump up to nahimsayin.

Letter to My Life
First verse is solid, nothing to complain about. That hook is fucking dope though. I really like it, the layered singing gives it a full/melodic feel. Second verse hit hard, I feel you dude. I’m just now starting college haha, I feel you on the confused feelings. This is actually quite a relatable song. Good stuff dude.

I Found Ya
This is baby making music. It’s so laid back hahah. I dig it dude. This is cool man, your flow and schemes are perfectly laid back for the beat. The beginning sounds like the intro to a porno with you talking hahaha. Your flow on this first is so damn catchy. Like a 90’s R&B synth rap collab. It’s a pretty refreshing take on your relationship area too yo. I really like this song, I’ve already told you that though. I can tell you’re really feeling this beat (get it?). Also, BUTTERFLIES…..

I Need to Get Away
The vibe from Eedee’s first bar is sick man. I love your delivery on this. The vocals sound a little crisper, I don’t know why. But it sounds cool dude. Your part is sick on this song, let’s see if Dilz can match it…well dang. Good delivery. You actually sound really passionate here. Your voice fades a bit in the middle, but no biggie. Good verse dude, this song’s got a dark/explorative feeling to it. I likey. Also very precise with the miles Eedee, I see you.

You’ll Never Stop Me
Siiiiick schemes here dude, rhymes galore. This is the track to go off on, the beat is intense. I see the macadamia punch yo haha. Hook’s pretty good too. The delivery on the beginning of the second verse combined with the schemes dude. Damn. This is perfect for the beat. You slip back to kinda the same delivery as usual later in the verse but fuck dude. Those first bars are damn nice. I’d kinda like to see you expand on your flow a little, you’ve got a good grasp on your current flow. The COD flow was a nice expansion, wanna see more of that.

When All The Light Dies
I think the only thing you need to work on in terms of your recording now Eedee is punch ins. Sometimes they’re pretty noticeable, other times they’re not. That’s not just based off this song, but something I’ve heard in the past. Just something haha. The beat is sick man, especially during the hook. Love the guitar. Your delivery is damn near perfect man, I feel you on this. Good stuff homie.

A Million Tears
Nice sample. I feeleth the sample. THE FLOW. Eedee, this flow is perfect man. You nailed it. Perhaps my second favorite performance of yours on this tape behind I Found Ya. Hooks dope too man, you’re really getting into your zone as far as music making lately. I think your album will show that. Like the symmetry of you and Dilz opening bars btw, good shit yo. Dilz I actually really like this verse man. Something about it, this is a quotable verse man. The scheme to end the verse is dope.

Through The Window
DAMN. I dig your flow on this a lot dude. And I’m guessing Eedee mixed this, if so, good shit dude. The mixing on this fits the song really well. Dilz, your part in the beginning through the sample sounds sick as well. This is one of my favorite songs from you man, this is really good dude. It’s just got such a good vibe to it.

I Give Myself to the Sea
I give myself to this song tbh. These beats are dope dude, this is a marked improvement from your past tapes. You guys are getting very good at picking dope beats. That guitar is dope. This is a solid ass track dude; you’ve got a great story telling vibe here. I love the hook too, this is a dope ass concept song man. I’m actually having a hard time putting I Found Ya over this. Flow is dope too. This is all around a good song.

Wish Me The Best
I dig the empty/melodic feel to this beat man. Eedee’s part is dope dope dope. Nothing much to say hahaha. Dilz, you’re coming into your sound man. You just sound really comfortable here. I dig the lyrics here too, very personal man. This is just a really good track to zone out to ya’know.

Overall, this tape is very pleasing to my ears. I like this man. You guys have a good dynamic. Dilz, just branch out on flows man. I think you’re really getting there though dude, this is a huge step in the right direction because you’ve got a killer nose for concepts. Eedee, you suck.

[Spyder]

time bomb - nothing too much i can really say, the beat kinda bored me but you guys rode it well. Dilz i havent heard much from you so i dont know if your improving or not lol, sometimes it was kind of hard to understand you but i got the gist of it.

conversations - like the back and fourth, deff better than the last track, eedee gotta step up the delivery a bit, to me the flow was on and off, Dilz did really well with the flow on this one.

letter to my life - not a bad track, only critique is do more mixing on the hook, the slight overlay didnt really distinguish it from the rest of the track, other than that good track.

i found ya - i like the laid back beat, but the talking kinda annoyed me. wanted a different topic matter from you on this, you do a lot of tracks about love/relationships. if you feel it you feel it, but i wanna mix up once in a while.

i need to get away - good track, nice collab on this, kinda bland topic matter imo sounds like everything ive heard before. but listening is good. hook kinda is ehh, but whatevs.

youll never stop me - sounds way too repetitive for me, when i look for self brag tracks, i look for innovative lyrics, like with some sick punches, and i just didnt get it hear. but sounded a bit too gangster for me, didnt like this one. sorry

when all light dies - good track, cant really say too much about this one, lyrics were solid.

a million tears - like the crossover type beat, nice switch up flow on this. way too much on the end for the extra beat though, shoulda clipped it lol

through the window - love this beat, heard it as like 'famous' mixes, you fit it well, with the accent the fast flow made it kinda hard for me to understand, i like the echo leading into the hook, was good mixing on this one. your voice and flow fit the beat well. prob my fav so far.
will feed rest later

[Eedee]

Thank you DGAF. :3

And Spyder, cheers for the feed. I feel you about the subject matter. But it gives me something to write about haha. It's a mixtape anyway, I'm not too worried about it. I kept some good shit for my album though (so peep it when it drops hehe).

[Mr.DGAF]

^^^ I can second that, he's got some really good concepts for the album imo.

[Eedee]

^^^ I can second that, he's got some really good concepts for the album imo.

:MY MAN gif here:

[FxTDilz]

Thank you everyone for the feedback, I'll take everything on board like I did with the last mixtape and hopefully keep improving lol. With the flow, I'm still finding mine and once I do that I will definitely feel comfortable to broaden and change shit up a bit. The biggest advice I got from my last mixtape was to change up my delivery so that's one thing I really hope was noticeable, still needs work of course but I feel I'm getting there haha. "Letter to my life" and "Through the window" were mixed by two different people as I was testing out a few guys who approached me. I've got the guy who mixed through the window on board and he's keen to mix songs for me whenever which is pretty cool haha.

and Eedee, like always I loved your work on this.. you beat selection, your lyrics, concepts and everything was good man. What I can't get over was how we almost pulled this off in like a week haha.
thank you again everyone.

[FxTDilz]

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