Here without You
The writing on this is quite impressive. In general you’ve just become a better writer; the bars are all connected and shit like a puzzle yo. Also, I can lick my elbow so the answer is hell YES. Bang. This is a pretty good song doe. Can’t complain about anything on it really.
The Night Shift
First of all, the beat is absolutely dope dude. You said CP made this with some help? If so, dang man. It’s simple, but catchy too. Anyhow, you fit the mood well on this. Just rapping man, this song in general has a really cool and mellow sound to it.
Punishment
This song is so fucking good man. Might be one of my favorites from you honestly. The atmosphere here is so creepy and dark, and you killed it. The scheme at the end of verse one is bananas yo, nahimsayin. Plus that hook is orgasmic. I came. Big Ax had a really good verse too, I really love the delivery he went with. The layers on that verse were dope as shit too. This is just a really solid song mane, you don’t deserve that punishment for this song.
Winds of Change
This beat is really damn good. I think I’ve said that before but YOLO. First verse was pretty good, writing isn’t too complex but it gets the point across. But that second verse. Yikes. He kept talking through the hook. Like the fuck man, I wanna hear this beautiful singing; not your shitty rapping. Flow was sloppy, delivery was forced, and half of the verse didn’t rhyme. And then he keeps talking. Why? Third verse is pretty good, has solid lyrics. Flow is a bit iffy, also, I don’t know why I’m still feeding this song because I’ve done so via the thread the original song was posted in. I guess I’m just writing this to see if you’re still reading. If so, go ahead and skip these last sentences. They hold no merit and are pointless, seriously, stop reading. Penis.
Once In a While
Flow on this is on point man, I really dig this song as well. These little interludes are dope. Nice sample too. I dig this a lot, good shizzle my nizzle.
Falling Tears
Yo, this guy keeps showing up on the tape. First of all, he sounds sick. And not the good sick, like he has a category five nose cold. Subject matter is played out, move on guy. Schemes not that impressive, I know I’ve heard him use the “reminiscing” before, so now he’s running out of ideas and recycling lines. Wow. Second verse salvages the song, I really really like this verse. I’ve told you I think it sounds a bit more authentic because you got it all in one take. Flow is rock solid here dude, this is one of my favorite verses on the tape from you.
Journey On
This song makes me feel like I could climb a set of stairs up to the moon yo. This has such a cool sound to it. Humans do indeed tend to sway hither and thither, I agree as well. You spit some dope lyrics here, that influence hit you hard and you spit some raw, unadulterated flames nahimean.
Moonshine
This song hits me in the feels yo. It's just so poetic and touching yo. You rapping straight into my heart valves with this one. I can see some people beefing cause this ain't no hardcore rap song, but I liked that you changed it up. Makes it feel a bit more sincere tbh. My left and right atrium contracted, shoving my aorta farther up my throat as I listened nahimean. In other words, this is how the heart shrinks.
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by Eedee » Sep 23rd, '13, 16:44 
