Vijilantee - a more serious song

[MistaVijilantee]

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=172250&p=2712641#p2712641

This is another collaboration I've done with Cooper Lower.
As always, I wrote the song yada yada he's on the chorus and also made the beat.
This is our entry for the Triple J Unearthed High contest.
Hope you guys enjoy and I'd really appreciate some feedback./


If you dig it, you can also download it for FREE: https://www.triplejunearthed.com/artist ... vijilantee

[MistaVijilantee]

so early on but I'm gonna bump this.

[mdemaz]

damn that hook is flames
i heard a chicks voice too who was that
the second verse was nice wasnt feeling the first

good shit man rep vic m8

imma do my thang for brissy 2 man peace out

[MistaVijilantee]

damn that hook is flames
i heard a chicks voice too who was that
the second verse was nice wasnt feeling the first

good shit man rep vic m8

imma do my thang for brissy 2 man peace out

I'll pass that on too Cooper, although I did write the lyrics & melody for that chorus haha
The girl is a mate of mine - Angela Kenna.
Is that because it was slower or just in general?
FK YEH BRA #DemazForQLD2014

[MistaVijilantee]

Bump.
It'd cool to get some feedback and/or peoples thoughts on the track

[Mr.DGAF]

Listening now. Writing on the first verse is dope. Not feeling that one effect you had in the middle of the verse. You've got a really unique delivery, you stress some weird syllables, but I like it. You kinda own it, idk haha. Not feeling the hook honestly, sounds like it's popping but that may be the beat(?) and I can't really hear the main voice. Second verse is dope as well, there's a part in the beginning where the flow is off cause you cram a bit but it recovers nicely in the end. I think I like the first verse more tho. Nice work mane.

[MistaVijilantee]

Listening now. Writing on the first verse is dope. Not feeling that one effect you had in the middle of the verse. You've got a really unique delivery, you stress some weird syllables, but I like it. You kinda own it, idk haha. Not feeling the hook honestly, sounds like it's popping but that may be the beat(?) and I can't really hear the main voice. Second verse is dope as well, there's a part in the beginning where the flow is off cause you cram a bit but it recovers nicely in the end. I think I like the first verse more tho. Nice work mane.

Thanks dude, some great feedback!
I think it sounds weird because of my accent - I rap in a higher voice than a speak so I'm still getting used to the whole thing but I'll take that on board.
I realized after I released it that the vocals on the hook aren't that loud - hopefully it doesn't effect the song too much?

[MistaVijilantee]

don't sleep