Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

[KoLyric]

Hmmm. You need to work on flow, voice, possibly quality, and, from this song, lyrical content.
I understand it's one of those freewrite related conceptual songs, but, there needs to be SOME sort of coherency, or at least something more interesting to say. Even songs chock full of punchlines can suffice interestingly enough.



You seem to have an interest here (judging by how many songs you've released, etc) so I recommend you keep fanning that spark into a flame.

Looking forward to hearing the next one.

[Jaba]

Hmmm. You need to work on flow, voice, possibly quality, and, from this song, lyrical content.
I understand it's one of those freewrite related conceptual songs, but, there needs to be SOME sort of coherency, or at least something more interesting to say. Even songs chock full of punchlines can suffice interestingly enough.



You seem to have an interest here (judging by how many songs you've released, etc) so I recommend you keep fanning that spark into a flame.

Looking forward to hearing the next one.

This is off my EP "Redemption EP". YOu should listen to that man (its in this thread). I also just released a new song off an upcoming project im doing and thats called "Dont Kill Me".

[KoLyric]

Hmmm. You need to work on flow, voice, possibly quality, and, from this song, lyrical content.
I understand it's one of those freewrite related conceptual songs, but, there needs to be SOME sort of coherency, or at least something more interesting to say. Even songs chock full of punchlines can suffice interestingly enough.



You seem to have an interest here (judging by how many songs you've released, etc) so I recommend you keep fanning that spark into a flame.

Looking forward to hearing the next one.

This is off my EP "Redemption EP". YOu should listen to that man (its in this thread). I also just released a new song off an upcoming project im doing and thats called "Dont Kill Me".

Link me to both right quick, plz

[Jaba]

Hmmm. You need to work on flow, voice, possibly quality, and, from this song, lyrical content.
I understand it's one of those freewrite related conceptual songs, but, there needs to be SOME sort of coherency, or at least something more interesting to say. Even songs chock full of punchlines can suffice interestingly enough.



You seem to have an interest here (judging by how many songs you've released, etc) so I recommend you keep fanning that spark into a flame.

Looking forward to hearing the next one.

This is off my EP "Redemption EP". YOu should listen to that man (its in this thread). I also just released a new song off an upcoming project im doing and thats called "Dont Kill Me".

Link me to both right quick, plz

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=175124 - new song

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=174925 - redemption ep

thanks