Do Not Kill Me

[Atone]

that, or kinda, east indian ish, like Mamouhd or whatever his name was on here a few years ago, he has that kind of accent

[Jaba]

you sound like a nerdy kid who stumbled into a recording studio all alone and decided to make a couple songs before somebody found you,

you don't have the voice, or if you do, you just havn't found it yet, you sound way to weird, this is me saying this, one of the most hated rappers on TR, i'[m not saying give up, i'm saying keep going, keep trying, but work on getting better, link up with somebody that knows what they are doing and have them help you

i'm currently taking alot of notes and getting alot of help from Demaz and Eedee, i know i can do better, and so can you

Why take notes from other younger TR rappers? Your 26 lmao... Listen to some of the highly respected rappers and take notes from them.

Thanks for the feedback. And calling me a nerdy kid. Funny, hehe....

And dont take this like im pissed cus i got "bad feedback". I dont give a fuck about feedback good or bad. I take it and try to improve. But really i make what sounds good too me. So dont take this as me "getting mad" or some shit.

[-AKA-]

Sound quality was bad. Lyrics were ehhhh. Delivery is not good.
Gotta have confidence when you get behind the mic. Still young yet tho. So practice

[mdemaz]

found myself actually kinda enjoying this

[Jaba]

found myself actually kinda enjoying this

BTW glad that thatguywihtheglasses avy is back

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btw whatd u like about it?

[SarkingMajor]

tbh it wasn't that bad but the hook sounded like Stephen Hawking taking a shit

[KingKailez]

It's needs a lil work but a decent effort. Keep working on it and your flow will naturally become better. I give it a 3/5