InsaneTRex94 wrote:I say let people fuck who they want to fuck and die how they want to die, whether it be from a heart attack after a Big Mac or crushing their skulls under a weight they were trying to lift.
TheVipBro wrote:why do you sound bored or is it intentional because it sounds a lot like "Show me your genitals", also is that your voice? did you alter it? cuz it sounds way too deep for a 13 year old
Eedee wrote:Thought I fed this. Guess not... haha
Anyway, this was a very dope/chill song. For being only 13, you're got a great grasp on lyricism and whatnot. All that needs work is your flow and delivery at times. I know the hook was supposed to be bland or whatever, so I won't talk about that. But sometimes your flow falters in the sense that you do sound bored or you stretch words to fit the beat. It's not as smooth as it can be, although it is very solid.
I'll write/record for your cypher song with Dilz soon, by the way.
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