Another Contest Entry - Vijilantee

[MistaVijilantee]

Feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=161224#p2218642

So, pretty much the same as all the other times, feedback is appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1xNgN0APpyU

edit - Lol, looks like you put a jupitercake forum link as your feedback. Edited in your LoF from Triple's song. - Eedee

[MistaVijilantee]

Cheers, Eedee.
I was on a proxy, lol.

[Francesco]

Interesting style homie... I liked it. Keep that up!

[Eedee]

Lol no problem.

As for the song, quality was pretty decent. Not terrible. But not top notch either. It was listenable, nahimean?
Your adlibs weren't lined up well, the best thing to do when mixing is zone in and line up those adlibs, otherwise everything sounds jumbled as shit. Also, put them at a lower volume than the main vocals. I felt like these adlibs were not only not lined up well, but pretty loud. Which added to the jumble.

Lyrics were nice, great rhyming and shit. Props for that. Delivery was a little... morbidly dry. Maybe switch up your tone or something during stretches. I dunno, felt dry after a while. Flow was slow, but as I told you on FB, I wished you had switched it up. But no worries.

Hopefully our collab will sound fucking dope hehe. I'm excited to work on it.

[MistaVijilantee]

Lol no problem.

As for the song, quality was pretty decent. Not terrible. But not top notch either. It was listenable, nahimean?
Your adlibs weren't lined up well, the best thing to do when mixing is zone in and line up those adlibs, otherwise everything sounds jumbled as shit. Also, put them at a lower volume than the main vocals. I felt like these adlibs were not only not lined up well, but pretty loud. Which added to the jumble.

Lyrics were nice, great rhyming and shit. Props for that. Delivery was a little... morbidly dry. Maybe switch up your tone or something during stretches. I dunno, felt dry after a while. Flow was slow, but as I told you on FB, I wished you had switched it up. But no worries.

Hopefully our collab will sound fucking dope hehe. I'm excited to work on it.

Don't worry my flow will go a lot harder on our collab, haha.
I'm sorry it's taking awhile, I've got school holidays coming up so I'mma do it then for sure.
As I said I couldn't really fuck with the beat, but I did what I could.

Also, I didn't do the mixing so I didn't complain, plus it was recorded really quickly, and mixed for that matter, because the deadline was nearly over.
Hopefully this EP, I'm recording with professional equipment and shit, should turn out good, I mean it'll be quite a bit more diverse then what I'm putting out.

[Eedee]

Word.