Catastrophic- "Winds Of Change" (ft. Spyder & Mike Murdoch)

[Eedee]

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CATASTROPHIC
Winds Of Change
ft. Spyder, & Mike Murdoch
(Prod. by The Unbeatables)

[Verse 1: Eedee]
I know it looks sketch, but trust me on this,
I'm walkin' down a path that's all bumpy and shit.
The road is all narrow, 'bout a hundred could fit
But if I didn't like my chances, I'd never fuck with the pen.
I am dancin' with the devil, square and boxed in,
Caged with a lion, where's the lock pick?
It's not fair at all, shit, but life never is,
Just watch this space, homie, time better bend.
To my fucking will or else my rage will explode
Into a supernova, you're faker than gold.
But waitin' is old, I'm 'bout to get this shit now,
I'll kick you straight in the fucking ass when you bend down.
(A wind of change approaches) can you feel it, dad?
Life dealt a shitty hand but I'm 'bout to deal it back.
And mom, don't worry, you know I got a heart of gold,
I kill every track I'm on, soon the world will start to know, that

[Hook: Mike Murdoch]
Feels like the very first time I missed you,
For a long time... baby I'm trying (I'm trying)
Feels like the very first time the winds of changed,
The clouds are parting babe,
I feel the Sun again...

[Verse 2: Mr. DGAF]
It’s like we’re taking one step forward, and two steps back
And I’ve become less hungry through a few setbacks
But I refuse to commute to my school yet that’s
Another lunge met stunted, I’m confused and sad
I think it’s funny everyone is on their future’s path
And I’m reclusive cause I’m stuck behind my foolish past
I know it’s like I beat a dead horse but hell for a price
I’ll suffice to say I’m well worn to set on a ride
Put the message aside for a lasting goodbye
This is everything I’m feeling it just happened to rhyme
Damn, those times we took for granted stupid it’s a foolish tactic
Now I’m full of genuine fear as I pull up at the
Place I know I’m living in here, but it’s too traumatic
Saying when I’m still insecure, so I’ll use this rapping
Basically to fill in the fear, with some useful practice
Who’d imagine I’d be saying see you next year, damn

[Verse 3: Spyder]
Lately I been hatin my situation like, greatly
Putting up fights times are changing and its pains me.
Fireflies light the sky and man its all so crazy
I’m the kinda type thinkin writing rhymes could save me.
I’m a damn puppet... on my own noose, fuck it
Pop another pill when I get home snooze, fuck it
Change for this drink was for the phone booth, fuck it
People cop their own views not tryin both shoes, fuck it.
I can dig it, I can love I, can feel it, I can hug it
Whatever slang you need for acceptance man I got it.
Once the man of the hour now my tower left crumblin'
Stand strong stand rugged now left a man nothin'.
Not even a chance bluffin, can't front and cant lie
Appearance of a zombie life like a vampire,
99? Shit problems you name it I got em,
Never taken a drug in my life, maybe that’s the problem.

[Spyder]

ima feed this myself

eedee, good delivery on this. lyrics werent anything special, flow was pretty good but i felt it slipped up a few times. idk if this was your beat choice but i liked the tempo on this one, was upbeat and allowed for a nice flow.

dgaf, loved the multies on this one. delivery was ok, sounds like maybe you raised your voice to increase your delivery idk. sometimes you had to stretch the scheme to hit the beat, but nothing major.

spyder, loved how you changed up the delivery to fit this style rather than your typical battle style. lyrics were fine. one of the flows ive seen from you, seemless and followed the beat well.

murdoch beast on the hook as always, wish he had more of a part.

beat was good

[Mr.DGAF]

Thanks dawg, I am actually quite fond of this one. And yeah, those end rhymes for the first few bars were purposely stretched. As for delivery, at least it was okay haha. I wanted a more emotional approach because I literally recorded this right before I left. It just felt natural.

Anywho, Mike murdered the hook. Like damn, it's so good.

:3, you did good on this one. I really like the delivery on the end bars to your mom, sounds harsh but actual and heartfelt. It was nice mane. Some solid schemes, nothing crazy but I've already told you what I think about your newer writing style. It fits coherent story telling a lot better than some of your older verses.

Spyder, I like the lyrics. It was a good approach because of what we sent you. You hit the flow well on some spots, the part where you repeat the fuck it scheme flowed really well. Seemed organic and well done even with the same schemes. There were other parts your flow is iffy; you're ending them on snares but it doesn't sound perfect. It's getting better though, you're not rushing parts anymore. It's just a matter of fluidity I think.

[Eedee]

Mike's hook was good. As always.

DGAF, I loved your rhymes, flow, voice, etc... I think you really nailed it. I knew you were feeling extra emotional when you recorded it, so it came out on the mic.

Spyder, I liked the content. As you said, this is battle shit haha. I like it. However, your flow did slip at times. Just work on more fluidity like DGAF said.

[Mr.DGAF]

Thanks pimp :3

[Francesco]

Solid... Y'all did good!

[Mr.DGAF]

Appreciate the looks mane!

[MistaVijilantee]

DGAF had the standout verse in terms of delivery, very passionate, Spyder was real as fuck, hook was quite solid it almost sounds like a sample, mad props.
I enjoyed Eedee's verse, however I feel like you're to cryptic at times, like you don't actually go into the problem you are getting emotional about if that makes sense. I think personalizing it more would be great.

[Spyder]

Thanks for the feed man

[Mr.DGAF]

Thanks for the feed man, really appreciate it.

[Tash8]

All of you guys have great deliveries, plenty of emotion. I enjoyed the first verse and I like the story you were trying to express, i feel it. Second verse was great imo, it had it all; good delivery, lyrics, a flow that changes up. Third verse could use some overdubs, it's very empty compared to first to verses, but regardless this is some solid work.

[Spyder]

thanks man really love the feed. i had some overlays, but i guess they werent loud enough. ill work on that in the mixing next time, good looks.

[Tash8]

thanks man really love the feed. i had some overlays, but i guess they werent loud enough. ill work on that in the mixing next time, good looks.

I heard the overlays, i was referring overdubbing you're entire verse over multiple times to give it the full feeling of the previous two verses. Its not something you would always do, but in this case i feel it fit the track better.

[Spyder]

gotchya

lyrics finally added lol

[Eedee]

Solid... Y'all did good!

Cheers!

DGAF had the standout verse in terms of delivery, very passionate, Spyder was real as fuck, hook was quite solid it almost sounds like a sample, mad props.
I enjoyed Eedee's verse, however I feel like you're to cryptic at times, like you don't actually go into the problem you are getting emotional about if that makes sense. I think personalizing it more would be great.

Thanks for the good looks. I think it's because I'm somewhat of an introvert, that when I write my lyrics, I feel the emotions I'm writing about it, but have a hard time fucking getting across what exactly it is. It's just more personal for me to express the feelings and emotions, but not quite the situation, if that makes sense. I'm working on it though.

All of you guys have great deliveries, plenty of emotion. I enjoyed the first verse and I like the story you were trying to express, i feel it. Second verse was great imo, it had it all; good delivery, lyrics, a flow that changes up. Third verse could use some overdubs, it's very empty compared to first to verses, but regardless this is some solid work.