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KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby KoLyric » Oct 6th, '13, 02:26

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This one was recorded in november I believe. Evidently I held it under-wraps until June (in the light of my plans of a new project).

This, in my opinion, is my last track riddled with mistakes. Everything from here on out is near perfect. I seriously can't wait to release it to you guys!!!!

KoLyric- Midnight Choir

It has always been a battle with juggling my passion for rap, and that is one of the main focuses of my project. I guess that's why it takes so long for me to release things because, subconsciously, I want my art to represent growth, if that makes sense.

Anyways, this song is much more lax, and I wish I pulled off a smoother hook/outro.
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Re: KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby MistaVijilantee » Oct 6th, '13, 09:32

I don't know if you're familiar with Atmosphere, but you sound a lot like Slug cross between Aesop Rock.
Both vocally, lyrically & in terms of your delivery.
Some of your adlibbing is a bit off though.
Nice & chill, really poetic.
Will check out more of your stuff, homie.
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Re: KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby Eedee » Oct 6th, '13, 21:56

^ No need to report yourself, dawg haha. Shit like that happens. All good.

As for the song, dope! Nice beat!

Your flow when you started out sounded off, then got back on track a few bars in. The lines just felt too long for the beat and you could hear the punch-ins.

Lyrics are great, again, love the imagery.

This is a chill song. Can't wait for the project. :y:
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Re: KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby KoLyric » Oct 7th, '13, 03:21

Thanks for the feed, guys! This is my most sound project and I can't wait to unveil it.
After its release, I've get to network with these TRShady artists.
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Re: KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby Eedee » Oct 7th, '13, 03:22

Yeah, you seem like a great guy. Welcome to the TR community. :y:
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Re: KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby mdemaz » Oct 7th, '13, 03:46

Damn, dude, that's fucking dope...
For the love of god, don't stop rapping.
I really like your voice and flow.

I agree with Eedee, as well, about the imagery being epic.

It's a yes from me.
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Re: KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby KoLyric » Oct 7th, '13, 18:53

Thanks so much guys! I'll definitely be sticking around!
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Re: KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby -AKA- » Nov 5th, '13, 06:02

kind of see hints of slug in your writing style. Well this track. Are you an atmosphere fan? Imagery is pretty nice.
I would only say get more into invoking more energy in voice when need be. Good stuff
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Re: KoLyric- Midnight Choir

Postby KoLyric » Nov 7th, '13, 08:56

-AKA- wrote:kind of see hints of slug in your writing style. Well this track. Are you an atmosphere fan? Imagery is pretty nice.
I would only say get more into invoking more energy in voice when need be. Good stuff


Thanks man! Slug is definitely one of my influences/inspirations. As for energy, I'd say I'm pretty animated in that sense. Unfortunately, none of which was expressed in this song haha.
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