TJ Marrs - Beauty And A Beast

[tjmarrs20]

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Song: https://soundcloud.com/tj-marrs/beautyandabeast

This is a song I wrote about/to my ex girlfriend. The first verse is basically me in her shoes, like how I might feel if the roles were reversed. The second verse is from her point of view and how I think she looks as things. The third verse is just from my point of view.

I really want to know what people think about the content and delivery. The quality may not be perfect but I do feel like it's getting better. I've been practicing my recording a lot lately. I want my words and thoughts heard though so here it is. Let me know what you guys think.

[KingZepII]

I really like this bro the hook isnt the best but i have trouble writing hook's too but practice makes perfect hopefully you have a EP or somthing out soon