I Heard 'Em Say "Freestyle"

[EvryOnesACrtc]

This is something I wrote and posted here a looong time ago, and have finally recorded. It's me "freestyling" and revealing a little too much while doing so haha just a fun little thing, nothing great or mind-blowing. I feel I nailed the concept that I had in my head, with the scenario and effects. Let me know what you think.

Here it is: https://soundcloud.com/arshenal-1/heard ... -freestyle

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[Eedee]

This was really interesting haha. The background noises (the beat) kinda overwhelmed your main vocals. But it was funny as fuck hahahaha.

[Mr.DGAF]

You do a good job of changing vocal tone to stress certain parts, i.e. the "free as a bird (in a cage)" line. It's the stuff in between you gotta work on. Just enunciate some more, that's honestly the only real complaint. Your voice doesn't sound incredibly confident but that'll develop. Also the quality wasn't great, my ears almost died towards the end on the super vocal spike hahaha. But the idea was cool and I like the effects behind it, obviously the lyrics are cool as well. Just gotta work on enunciating and confidence.

[EmsPreacher]

It fuckin sucks. I would cut my dick off if i was this lame.