yeah it seems nice but we can't hear you... it kinda sounds like you're not too confident though, you should speak with energy and be proud of yourself! lol, and with practise you could get better, if that's something you have trouble with... or maybe you had energy and it's just that we can't hear clearly... so to make your voice sound louder, the most simple way would be to turn the volume of the beat down... or boosting the volume of your vocals up, but it may cause some distortion, so you might want to compress your vocals (check Coccoa's sticky thread giving audio advices to do it, you should see what you should do, basically)... you should try to adjust that and re upload the song, cause this way, it's hard to judge