Fine Line
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Fine Line
by UofLCard » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:23
I really dig the last verse.
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Re: Fine Line
by mdemaz » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:27
decent
thought the beat was too wacky for an emotion storytelling thing but whatever
thought the beat was too wacky for an emotion storytelling thing but whatever
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Re: Fine Line
by Mr Change » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:34
When I first heard this song I tried my best to not allow myself to overrate it because it was quickly becoming everyones favorite. But there's no denying--that last verse is downright perfect. One of the sweetest, emotional verses of Em's career.
"I still remember the times when
They were simpler than the rhymes of
Vanilla Ice were, when I was just killin' the mics
I'll never forget what that feeling was like"
Compact, witty, anecdotitish(?) but relevant opening bars
"Everything about it I miss
Which now reminds me
Put a thousand lighters in the sky for the Outsidaz"
The way he transitions from the things he misses from his life before fame into a talking about the Outsidaz is unexpected and abrupt yet feels so true and from the heart. Amazing delivery here.
"Zee you always supported me
You vouched, I will never forget that and
How you guys, accepted me for me and Pace
I love you too,"
The sincerity and raw emotion here is astounding, topped off with an overpowering I love you.
"Inside I'll always be an outsider
My life has been turned inside out but I"
Double entendre here is so smart and smoothly delivered
And above all that the entire thing is just written perfectly.
AND A INSTRUMENTAL OUTRO--WE NEED MORE OF THESE EM
"I still remember the times when
They were simpler than the rhymes of
Vanilla Ice were, when I was just killin' the mics
I'll never forget what that feeling was like"
Compact, witty, anecdotitish(?) but relevant opening bars
"Everything about it I miss
Which now reminds me
Put a thousand lighters in the sky for the Outsidaz"
The way he transitions from the things he misses from his life before fame into a talking about the Outsidaz is unexpected and abrupt yet feels so true and from the heart. Amazing delivery here.
"Zee you always supported me
You vouched, I will never forget that and
How you guys, accepted me for me and Pace
I love you too,"
The sincerity and raw emotion here is astounding, topped off with an overpowering I love you.
"Inside I'll always be an outsider
My life has been turned inside out but I"
Double entendre here is so smart and smoothly delivered
And above all that the entire thing is just written perfectly.
AND A INSTRUMENTAL OUTRO--WE NEED MORE OF THESE EM
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Re: Fine Line
by PAINKILLƎR » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:37
mdemaz wrote:decent
thought the beat was too wacky for an emotion storytelling thing but whatever
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Re: Fine Line
by mdemaz » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:46
it was tho
sounded like a baby beat
sounded like a baby beat
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Re: Fine Line
by csw621 » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:47
I can't stand the way baby starts. Unpopular opinion?
Fine line best song on shady xv
Fine line best song on shady xv
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Re: Fine Line
by FriedSchizoprenic » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:57
8.5, great lyrics, but i dont like so much the beat.
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Re: Fine Line
by Mathers » Nov 22nd, '14, 11:16
I really like the beat, it reminds me off something off ''The Eminem Show'', great song.
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Re: Fine Line
by Kill You » Nov 22nd, '14, 12:18
I like the song a lot. 3rd favorite. The piano in the beat. 
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Re: Fine Line
by UofLCard » Nov 22nd, '14, 20:09
mdemaz wrote:decent
thought the beat was too wacky for an emotion storytelling thing but whatever
I like that the 'wackiness' of the beat mellows out in the last verse.
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Re: Fine Line
by Mr Change » Nov 22nd, '14, 20:11
i never thought the beat sucked tbh
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Re: Fine Line
by DetroitSkills » Nov 22nd, '14, 20:54
great song, needs a demaz beat doe
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