8 new beats produced by me....

[randomghost]

alone in the rain
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2200471a72daa2/

batman
http://www.zshare.net/audio/220048967a9a85/

in the block
http://www.zshare.net/audio/22005081e58aff/

alone in the dark
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2200540fd4e5c8/

arabian nights (instrumental)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/22005566676096/

hope
http://www.zshare.net/audio/220057132986d8/

do we deserve to live
http://www.zshare.net/audio/220059516dd5b1/

piano techno beat (i did this long time ago)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/22006197bae31b/


i would really appreciated some feed and advices

[Hadez]

they pretty good

my favorite would have to be "Alone In The Dark" just cuz i like those kinda dark/emotional joints.

i would recommend puttin a little more variety to the patterns. it seemed like the loops were kinda short so when played over n over it got repetitive. otha than that they good man, keep it up

[randomghost]

they pretty good

my favorite would have to be "Alone In The Dark" just cuz i like those kinda dark/emotional joints.

i would recommend puttin a little more variety to the patterns. it seemed like the loops were kinda short so when played over n over it got repetitive. otha than that they good man, keep it up

thanks man.... .....props to mart for all the advices he gave

[Tash8]

you got some real nice ones in there

but like hadez said they're osmetimes to short haha but it's all good

keep it up man

[mart85]

I didn't listen to all of them, but they're nice... your drum patterns are well made, and could probably be used well by you/or another rapper... the best I heard from those beats is probably "do we deserve to live"... but I'll try to give you another advice... in that beat, you repeated the main melody often, but with different instruments... it's good to have different instruments but I would suggest to try to have a slightly different melody pattern when a new instrument comes in... it can be more simple than the main melody, and it would still sound good and it would support the main melody better IMO...

but just keep on experimenting, you'll get better this way

[DC4952]

beats are pretty nice. i suggest a better snare for the first one IMO. I think my favorite one would have to be alone in the rain. the melody and drums were nice

[B.A.D.]

hey random post the full track for "do we deserve to live" hahaha

its a good track, good beat

[randomghost]

I didn't listen to all of them, but they're nice... your drum patterns are well made, and could probably be used well by you/or another rapper... the best I heard from those beats is probably "do we deserve to live"... but I'll try to give you another advice... in that beat, you repeated the main melody often, but with different instruments... it's good to have different instruments but I would suggest to try to have a slightly different melody pattern when a new instrument comes in... it can be more simple than the main melody, and it would still sound good and it would support the main melody better IMO...

but just keep on experimenting, you'll get better this way

thanx mart, and i will keep practicing

beats are pretty nice. i suggest a better snare for the first one IMO. I think my favorite one would have to be alone in the rain. the melody and drums were nice

glad u liked it Dc and i will do ma best to make it better..mad props

hey random post the full track for "do we deserve to live" hahaha

its a good track, good beat

thanx x

[Kez]

I wanna use some of these beats but they're not the length of an actual song

Beats are good, but i don't see them being used for any purpose if they dont have the structure of a normal rap song.