New Style (Meaning New Beat)

[Ethos]

A couple days ago I got in tune with my inner sadness and bam! this came to mind.

http://www.myspace.com/p0isoncontrol

It's the "what I live for" beat that's new.

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[DC4952]

the melody is real good, instuments are nice, the only thing i suggest is to get rid of the 909 kick and replace it

[mart85]

yeah the kick doesn't really fit with the mood of the song IMO... the rest is nice tho, probably the best beat I've heard from you so far... but the instrument that comes in at around 0:58-1:00, it kinda clashed with the rest... maybe you could try to make it "higher" (like, higher notes) it could be better this way

but good job on this

[Tash8]

i've heard that intro pattern before

real real nice, but reallly get rid of that kick, it ruins it..

[Ethos]

yeah the kick doesn't really fit with the mood of the song IMO... the rest is nice tho, probably the best beat I've heard from you so far... but the instrument that comes in at around 0:58-1:00, it kinda clashed with the rest... maybe you could try to make it "higher" (like, higher notes) it could be better this way

but good job on this

Are you talking about the strings?

[mart85]

yeah the kick doesn't really fit with the mood of the song IMO... the rest is nice tho, probably the best beat I've heard from you so far... but the instrument that comes in at around 0:58-1:00, it kinda clashed with the rest... maybe you could try to make it "higher" (like, higher notes) it could be better this way

but good job on this

Are you talking about the strings?

yeah it sounds like strings

[Ethos]

Okay well I figured out that my strings were panning. I must of screwed around saved it and forgot.

and I added a new kick. it's converting right now. so i'll upload the new version in five minutes.

[Ethos]

Okay I re-upped it. and for some reason myspace music player screws it up cuz my drums were not as loud as they are on it.

[mart85]

yeah, this kick is much better now... and the strings sounds better too

[Ethos]

yeah, this kick is much better now... and the strings sounds better too

I found out what the other problem was with the strings. Like you said they clashed. the cello needed to be taken out of the chorus part . so thanks for telling me about the strings clashing. otherwise I wouldnt have noticed it until later on in life.

[Tash8]

nice

liking the beat

like i said i've heard the melody before but u made it sound real sick

[Ethos]

Thanks Tash I dont know where youve heard the melody before. but all is good.

[Tash8]

dunno maybe i did it on my keyboard, from the sound of it, it sounds liek a real simple one..