Emotional Beat

[Tash8]

This is an emotional beat i just made.. I really think its my best yet and it only took me a few hours

there's no chorus if you guys wondered about that, it's just gonna be a whole verse I'll write to ... I'll be using this for something

so please feed:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2329643c5ea740/

^ high quality only, sorry.

[DelinQuent]

the beat was verrrrrry plain. there's just not enough in it. sometimes simple is good, but not here. keep working.

[Tash8]

i'm gonna add bass to it, i was thinking of adding violin but it didn't work out cuz i couldn't find any violin sounds...

and once i have my stuff written to it, i'm gonna add stuff to it and see what i need to add, a more dark sound etc...

[mart85]

yeah, bass would help a lot but what you got is alright, the piano sounds good... like DQ said, a little more details would help, but it's still not bad, good job the drums kinda reminded me of No Apologies

keep practising

[Tash8]

they kinda are like no apologies, I do real simple drums

it was hihat, kick, snare, kick, kick/hihat, snare

I think no apologies was

kick, snare, kick, kick, snare

thanks for the feed mart

[Hadez]

they kinda are like no apologies, I do real simple drums

it was hihat, kick, snare, kick, kick/hihat, snare

I think no apologies was

kick, snare, kick, kick, snare

thanks for the feed mart

there was a couple hihats scattered in the No Apologies beat

its ok, u got the melody to be on beat with the drums, which is nice. i didnt like how there was that one string sound that just stayed a constant note the whole time, kinda annoying after a while. but perhaps adding vocals will draw attention away from that little factor. overall pretty good, but add more to it, like the people above me said.

[IceAxe]

yeah that one note string gets old after a few seconds.. and like mart said before, add some bass wopuld help...it'd add "substance" or somethin to it.

But it is one of your better beats, keep it up

[Tash8]

thanks, i'm adding bass now

and that string noise in the bg, i used the CTF thing, and i'm not worried about it cause the vocals will cover that

[Tash8]

*Updated*

[MoBrat]

not bad man....i cant really give u advice on what 2 add and what 2 take away but from a artist point of view it's a good beat i could see this being used to make a sick track

[Ethos]

This is some of your better stuff here
I give ya propz for that. but it still needs some work. keep it up

[DC4952]

yea this aint bad, definetley better than your first ones. good work