supergoo13 wrote:Today is the day, and im gunna take all day, to make u feel pointless, u'll give up and say ur gay,
Im not gunna mention no names, and its not about games, its about pullin ur pants down, its about makin u pay.
But face facts, u be feelin, this heat, u be peelin, cause I mean u to be keelin, into a little ball in the corner,.
What a magical rapical egotistical track, that pulls ur endorphones straight into ur ear phones,.
So loud that four thousand volts of electricty, aint gunna come close to the pain of this hiphopcrasy,.
I just wanted to say, ur gay, hey hey, not ur a fag hemafrodite stuff a Jaffa up ya recta dite,.
A lesson in rhymin, a lesson in time, just gotta pretend ur a gangsta, and hold on to me nine,
See im just doin my thing, I aint letting off steam, im just writing a rhyme, with you on my mind.
Sorry, please continue.
supergoo13 wrote:I did listen to the beat provided, then wrote a first verse, just trying to be funny, but a verse, then several people posted a few lines of rap. Just couldn't help myself posting something. Thank you for the procedure.
Just interested in practicing short verses somewhere. I guess doing a rap battle, or just a verse by verse thing, might be fun, sort of twisting and turning around someones stuff, line by line, could help improve what I do now. I didn't want to be the cover of newsweek, and make my own creative writing topic.
Just Silver wrote:I don't think mine goes to the beat lol
DetroitSkills wrote:Just Silver wrote:I don't think mine goes to the beat lol
its ok, youre just silver
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