(EVT R1) Spyder vs. Silver

[Just Silver]

Lookin good cant wait for votes

im actually happy with my verse with the beat

[J.R.]

(5) Comedic Value
Please more it's hard to be funny, that said I found neither of you slightly funny at all. Silver gets these points for my smile at his opening line.


(3) Strength Of Concept
Spyder, he stuck to it best. Simple as can be.

(3) Rhyming / Multies
Spyder again, just multiple multies (see what I did there?) in most lines and silver.. You lacked it. Your verses was good bud, but it lacked that.

(3) Flow *
Hard to judge, but ill give this one to Spyder. I don't like your last line, but multies make the flow easier and yours fit the beat best

(2) Vocab / Complexity
Spyder. Neither of you used advanced vocab or complexity, but soma was cool to see.

(1) Best Lines
Spider for my favorite line. "Fuckin strut in the club with Silver on my right
Give the cig a light, little liquor and some ice."

Soo... Spyder 12- 5 Just Silver

[Just Silver]

good shit guy

[Spyder]

thanks for the vote fam