(EVT R1) Blu vs. Slim Fiasco

[Blu]

"Just last week I died, my funeral was like no other
A priest was doing the eulogy while I was in the casket
Couldn't hear it so I yelled: READ LOUDER YOU BASTARD!"

Hahaha

[Slim Fiasco]

Good job Blu, it's cool that we didn't diss each other, haha. I liked how you talked in "real-time" in that last couple of lines.

[Sam.]

This looks like a Rap Battle to me?

[J.R.]

Real talk, why am I always first to vote

(5) Comedic Value
This is gonna go to Slim, mostly for the Ollie line, partly because Blu wasn't funny at All.

(3) Strength Of Concept
Also to Slim, because he stuck to his better.

(3) Rhyming / Multies
Slim, Blu just had end multies while Slim had more.

(3) Flow *
I've always thought Multies attributed to flow even on a beat, so Slim.

(2) Vocab / Complexity
Slim, not much deep vocabulary used but you did have more than just end rhymes so I'll give you that.

(1) Best Lines
Slim. "Or maybe she does porn, who knows? Now let's move on
The way this story flows, you'd think I use a crayon"


Slim 17- Blu 0

[Blu]

Ouch haha.