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Ego VS EminemStanatic/EmTV (R1 - CW 2013)

Ego VS EminemStanatic/EmTV (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Eedee » Dec 6th, '13, 03:45

Rhyming/Flow [2]
Chemistry [2]
Creativity [1]
Structure [1]
Free Point [1] - EminemStanatic

Seeing as how EmTV blatantly refused to work with EmStan even after signing up and choosing that team (AND saying he would be PMing EmStan to work on it), the verse for EmStan/EmTV is only EmStan's work, and because of this, we've given EmStan the free point as a handicap of sorts. Please judge fairly in light of this.

Note: EmTV has been banned from any future Painkiller/Eedee hosted CW tournaments.

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EminemStanatic

Travel the road
Gravel and groves
Litter the path that I wove
Through, after the stones moved

Desolation and desperate notions that I am going through
I'm mad at the world too
Cause it has been just so cruel

The sky flares as I brood
Clouds mirror my moods
And my merriments too
Like it's an aware-of-it glass pool

But I can't skip stones on the surface; it's un-affect-able
Two different worlds
Separate yet inseparable

And as I walk, I'm feeling the trees breath
With every step I take
They sneer without clear jest

I live in a smeared mess
A world that has never loved it's lovers
So I suffer
And brush up the dreams so crushed and butchered

Twisted into distorted scenes
With contorted screams
I was born in these
So it ain't surprising they've torn up me

But there is more to I
Than yours can see
So I pour my means
To these papers
And adore those who do more than read

So as I look into these forest trees
That tell more of a story than you'd sort of believe

Every engraved heart
And all the acorns and the leaves
Trampled on by the children who felt joyous in tears

I see the point is here
What I've been missing that's so nice
Accompaniment
But it's been here the whole time

Cause every mark is a friend
And every scar is a memory
So I'm surrounded by plenty
In these many fields that know mine

Even the branches that jutted out just to get to me
They still played a special part in these eventful years

So I shake hands with the shadows
And cans of empty beers
Smashed glass that's evoked
Scratches and plenty tears

They all made me into the person that stands now
I am proud
To have been nurtured
By the roots that have kept me weird

Cause if I was normal I'd never have seen the favor
So I truly mean it when I say I will see you later

VS

Beat

Geno
Menzo
Ego

Hurry up man, whatcha laggin' behind for?!
This bag ain't draggin' itself, you're an eye sore,
Second thought, stay the fuck back, I don't want help,
'Til we get through the woods man, got a light source?

Of course I do, it gets dark by 4 I thought I warned
I brought a whole sack for you to shuffle through
With some rope, a pair of gloves and two shovels too
So wanna pipe your mouth til we're over there?
We need a plot site now 'fore the cops find out
I feel overbeared, distraught and mind torn
What if we're caught? I'm not sure you're actually certain

What the hell happened? You're actin' nervous,
You act like there ain't a fag to murder,
A broad to be bound and then gagged - we turn her,
Or a fraud to be clowned that we rap in circles,
I was lost but I found my other half, it hurts cuz,
It seems like every time, you're weak and soft,
There's a body around in this bag to bury,
Are you really gonna fuckin' blow Ego off?!

God forbid it ever be your fault!
It's always up to me, fuck you G, you're wrong
You envy the thought of every job we've done
Cuz deep down you know that I lead this squad
You're leechin' off, and you blame me? Get lost!

It ain't like that man, I've been feelin' odd,
We're the strongest team, but chemistry's been off,

So what's this beef you on? Want me to sob?
If it's an apology you want, see a Doc

Nah fuck you dude, I don't need you, dawg,
I got a knife right here and I'll bleed you off,

Easy boss, lemme get my heater drawn,
Are ya ready?
1, 2, 3, you're on! Go!
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Re: Ego VS EminemStanatic/EmTV (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Just Silver » Dec 6th, '13, 14:22

Rd1 was a letdown for everyone
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Re: Ego VS EminemStanatic/EmTV (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby yung rom » Dec 7th, '13, 05:20

Haha damn i got crushed... I guess I should've seen that coming. I wrote it more like poetry and less rap-like. Also it was 2 in the morning. Maybe next time.
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Re: Ego VS EminemStanatic/EmTV (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Eedee » Dec 7th, '13, 05:32

EminemStanatic wrote:Haha damn i got crushed... I guess I should've seen that coming. I wrote it more like poetry and less rap-like. Also it was 2 in the morning. Maybe next time.


It's fine, EmTV screwed you over hard.
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Re: Ego VS EminemStanatic/EmTV (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby CrashBand » Dec 7th, '13, 11:59

amazing chemistry guys

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Re: Ego VS EminemStanatic/EmTV (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby CrashBand » Dec 8th, '13, 01:22

oooosh, dat chemistry

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Re: Ego VS EminemStanatic/EmTV (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby CrashBand » Dec 11th, '13, 07:54

Horsebot3K wrote:The chemistry is strong between Geno and Menzo


bigray wrote:but with this drop they proved that they still have the chemistry and they are here to win..


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