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Chemistry [2]
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Structure [1]
Free Point [1] - EminemStanatic
Seeing as how EmTV blatantly refused to work with EmStan even after signing up and choosing that team (AND saying he would be PMing EmStan to work on it), the verse for EmStan/EmTV is only EmStan's work, and because of this, we've given EmStan the free point as a handicap of sorts. Please judge fairly in light of this.
Note: EmTV has been banned from any future Painkiller/Eedee hosted CW tournaments.
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EminemStanatic
Travel the road
Gravel and groves
Litter the path that I wove
Through, after the stones moved
Desolation and desperate notions that I am going through
I'm mad at the world too
Cause it has been just so cruel
The sky flares as I brood
Clouds mirror my moods
And my merriments too
Like it's an aware-of-it glass pool
But I can't skip stones on the surface; it's un-affect-able
Two different worlds
Separate yet inseparable
And as I walk, I'm feeling the trees breath
With every step I take
They sneer without clear jest
I live in a smeared mess
A world that has never loved it's lovers
So I suffer
And brush up the dreams so crushed and butchered
Twisted into distorted scenes
With contorted screams
I was born in these
So it ain't surprising they've torn up me
But there is more to I
Than yours can see
So I pour my means
To these papers
And adore those who do more than read
So as I look into these forest trees
That tell more of a story than you'd sort of believe
Every engraved heart
And all the acorns and the leaves
Trampled on by the children who felt joyous in tears
I see the point is here
What I've been missing that's so nice
Accompaniment
But it's been here the whole time
Cause every mark is a friend
And every scar is a memory
So I'm surrounded by plenty
In these many fields that know mine
Even the branches that jutted out just to get to me
They still played a special part in these eventful years
So I shake hands with the shadows
And cans of empty beers
Smashed glass that's evoked
Scratches and plenty tears
They all made me into the person that stands now
I am proud
To have been nurtured
By the roots that have kept me weird
Cause if I was normal I'd never have seen the favor
So I truly mean it when I say I will see you later
VS
Beat
Geno
Menzo
Ego
Hurry up man, whatcha laggin' behind for?!
This bag ain't draggin' itself, you're an eye sore,
Second thought, stay the fuck back, I don't want help,
'Til we get through the woods man, got a light source?
Of course I do, it gets dark by 4 I thought I warned
I brought a whole sack for you to shuffle through
With some rope, a pair of gloves and two shovels too
So wanna pipe your mouth til we're over there?
We need a plot site now 'fore the cops find out
I feel overbeared, distraught and mind torn
What if we're caught? I'm not sure you're actually certain
What the hell happened? You're actin' nervous,
You act like there ain't a fag to murder,
A broad to be bound and then gagged - we turn her,
Or a fraud to be clowned that we rap in circles,
I was lost but I found my other half, it hurts cuz,
It seems like every time, you're weak and soft,
There's a body around in this bag to bury,
Are you really gonna fuckin' blow Ego off?!
God forbid it ever be your fault!
It's always up to me, fuck you G, you're wrong
You envy the thought of every job we've done
Cuz deep down you know that I lead this squad
You're leechin' off, and you blame me? Get lost!
It ain't like that man, I've been feelin' odd,
We're the strongest team, but chemistry's been off,
So what's this beef you on? Want me to sob?
If it's an apology you want, see a Doc
Nah fuck you dude, I don't need you, dawg,
I got a knife right here and I'll bleed you off,
Easy boss, lemme get my heater drawn,
Are ya ready? 1, 2, 3, you're on! Go!