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Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Dec 6th, '13, 04:38

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So I guess we're in an old forest, that's what the host told us
Approach closer the cold’s growing I spoke slowly
“Eedee I’m feeling like” – he cuts me off fast
“Jesus, my skin is tingling”, just then a bomb blasts
We fall back, debris fills the sky with dark grey
It's like my heart gave, look at him with a starved face
Our shocked gaze interrupted by gunfire, shit!
But why is this happening? Shit, “might we gotta fight?”
Then we see some glocks laying, pick ‘em up right quick
“I'm eyin' it too, dawg, it's quite the plot device”
“How convenient”, looking up I see the enemies laugh
War's a star-crossed lover, a Confederate Flag
We set in a stance as we fire into the woods
Peeps are dyin' this isn't good! Behind us I hear a foot
As it crackles and crunches within the leaves on the ground
The laughter's abundance isn't the need I have now
--This fucker thinks he’s slick, “he’s maneuvered next to you!”
Eedee hears my warning as he moves to wreck the fool

I duck quick, like "fuck this", it's true I let it flew
And it flew true, but who know it hit Dewey Decimal?

Oh shit, we’re in the Union but it seems that Boston “turned” on us
This drop the “t” party’s got Boston in an “urn” for us

These two are palin' in comparison, I'm hopin' they would fight
Liberal head-shots ensures their minds are closin' for the night.

BANG – we spit the rapid fire ammunition, land inside this faggot’s ears
And self-detonated like jihad family members

And lest they think they win, they best say "hi" to heaven,
We'll tower over you, burn through your bars like 9/11.

We ice our weapon, -- the battle came to an end
Then I look at Eedee’s face as we laugh and exchange a grin
RIP to our opponents, they're prolly in heaven now,
Lock and load, motherfuckers, get ready for the second round

Boston/Dewey Decimal

no verse

Well Catastrophic advances by default, unfortunately for the other team this tournament isn't about who can bark the loudest.

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Re: Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Dec 6th, '13, 05:02

I remember when I first read this and chuckled at the first line, I was like okaaay...? Then turns out your in a battlefield and shit, lots of things going on and then you bring up your opponents and I was like woah haha nice. It played out really nice.

The rhyming was great as well as the flow of the whole thing, your chemistry is insane, the back'n'forth is always fun to read. Dope shit

And lest they think they win, they best say "hi" to heaven,
We'll tower over you, burn through your bars like 9/11.

We ice our weapon, -- the battle came to an end
Then I look at Eedee’s face as we laugh and exchange a grin
RIP to our opponents, they're prolly in heaven now,
Lock and load, motherfuckers, get ready for the second round

I liked this too haha, sounded cool as fuck. Then ended it as if it were only a warm up and you're only getting started the next round. Great verse.
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Re: Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Dec 6th, '13, 05:04

PAINKILLƎR wrote:I remember when I first read this and chuckled at the first line, I was like okaaay...? Then turns out your in a battlefield and shit, lots of things going on and then you bring up your opponents and I was like woah haha nice. It played out really nice.

The rhyming was great as well as the flow of the whole thing, your chemistry is insane, the back'n'forth is always fun to read. Dope shit

And lest they think they win, they best say "hi" to heaven,
We'll tower over you, burn through your bars like 9/11.

We ice our weapon, -- the battle came to an end
Then I look at Eedee’s face as we laugh and exchange a grin
RIP to our opponents, they're prolly in heaven now,
Lock and load, motherfuckers, get ready for the second round

I liked this too haha, sounded cool as fuck. Then ended it as if it were only a warm up and you're only getting started the next round. Great verse.


Appreciate the feedback mane.
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Re: Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Just Silver » Dec 6th, '13, 13:17

These first rounds suck
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Re: Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Just Silver » Dec 6th, '13, 19:25

I only meant since there was no opposing piece

Their piece was well done

And yes mine sucked lol
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Re: Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Eedee » Dec 11th, '13, 05:40

Geno wrote:Lol Boston hyped himself up so much too


No one has seen him since. :laughing:
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Re: Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Dec 11th, '13, 05:57

Eedee wrote:
Geno wrote:Lol Boston hyped himself up so much too


No one has seen him since. :laughing:


He dropped in A.S. yo.
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Re: Catastrophic VS Boston/Dewey Decimal (R1 - CW 2013)

Postby Eedee » Dec 11th, '13, 06:10

Mr.DGAF wrote:
Eedee wrote:
Geno wrote:Lol Boston hyped himself up so much too


No one has seen him since. :laughing:


He dropped in A.S. yo.


He had time to do that, but not to write for a tourney he signed up for.

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