Coleon wrote:better now def
All I needed to hear, haha.
Merci!
Coleon wrote:better now def
Coleon wrote:link me to Common Sense please, I need to show some peeps
Tornado wrote:Ok, i aint gonna do a track by track review cos i can say eveything in 2 paragraphs
Act Accoringly and Woman Woes are by far the two best tracks on the tracks cos they show a different side to you cos every other track is in your safe, same old flow and delievery style and to be honest the subject content bhardly changed, lack of topics, some songs flew by and felt samey and got boring. Also some rhymes throughtout seemed like it didn't connect (kinda what chambers was saying) like the end of the line doesnt even in even a half rhyme, you use pronounciation to make them sound to rhyme which sounds weird. Also, sounded like your Verses were too thick like they were Choruses, nothing major just a perference, cos on some track you don't need so many takes.
Overall I'd give it a 6/10,maybe harsh but the reason is i feel you could make better tracks and you have skills, i just feel like there was nothing gripping about the album, no replay value to me. It's overall a step up from LO in terms of quality and skill just the standout tracks on that keeps me listening.
Steve Spag wrote:Tornado wrote:Ok, i aint gonna do a track by track review cos i can say eveything in 2 paragraphs
Act Accoringly and Woman Woes are by far the two best tracks on the tracks cos they show a different side to you cos every other track is in your safe, same old flow and delievery style and to be honest the subject content bhardly changed, lack of topics, some songs flew by and felt samey and got boring. Also some rhymes throughtout seemed like it didn't connect (kinda what chambers was saying) like the end of the line doesnt even in even a half rhyme, you use pronounciation to make them sound to rhyme which sounds weird. Also, sounded like your Verses were too thick like they were Choruses, nothing major just a perference, cos on some track you don't need so many takes.
Overall I'd give it a 6/10,maybe harsh but the reason is i feel you could make better tracks and you have skills, i just feel like there was nothing gripping about the album, no replay value to me. It's overall a step up from LO in terms of quality and skill just the standout tracks on that keeps me listening.
Thanks for the honest feed man, I appreciate it. However I don't understand what you're talking about the rhymes not connecting? If you read the lyrics along with it, pretty much everything rhymes together in some sort of way. I feel ya' about the pronunciation, however I personally don't feel like I overused it in the least bit (maybe in a couple tracks but not for the majority). I don't try to change my voice in any way, unless it's a parody track (Napoleon); what you hear is pretty much me, lol.
Much thanks for checkin' out the album though nonetheless and I'm glad you enjoyed those two tracks!
Coleon wrote:Spag.....you need to make a Zeitgeist song or I'm gonna write one.........
Coleon wrote:drop it.....or at least pm it to me....I have a feeling that Immortal Technique will be getting heavy circulation from me for a while and that Zeitgeist will be replayed multiple times
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