Enimee vs Geno (Reprisal)

[Spyder]

welcome to your repossession, cause our last battle was so damn lame
ima have to leave you in a depression, like holes-in-the plain(plane)

ima set your soul-in-to-flames, while im huffin a mean-g-note
cause you sold-it-for-fame, so let me ask, is he-a-ge?--NO!

please bro, we all know that im a fuckin master on the monica
your internet friends wouldnt find you hot if rappin was erotica

now im trashin on is moniker, you couldnt grasp every noun or (umm)
get ears noticin orchestras. gravitatin empty nothingness orbuhtun (orbitin)

im gory even now offerin great eternity notably ostentatious
grabbin enimees nostrils the odor is to raw to face it

smells like dead pussy inside of a vaccum, like i hoovered your pet
the tides to steep like im ridin the kraken, now dude lemme guess

you gonna talk bout how im fake and played out, and i been here forever
prolly reference my age and say how ill never be a contender

you should label that verse as been done and address it return to sender!
ask me if id sell out to be an admin of a site thats earnin no cheddar

get a laugh in the face, a thumbs up emoticon for your efforts
and a reply to the message with a casual , and a NEVER!

you can check every letter, and run my verse through with a fine tooth comb
youll never be better, cause your addicted, every line you blow

im only 21, and i been rappin since 05, this shits obviously known
but if you foul me, your off of the balcony, thats what i call a free throw

he sits in front of his desk, feet swole, jerkin to a peep show
he aint the best, please bro, but still thats the only way you'd beat pole



bar 1: repossession(reprisal) i got robbed in the last battle we had "imo"
depression-holes in the plain(plane) = plain people get depressed, if a plane had a hole in it and crashed into a plain as in a field it would leave a depression(which is a landmark google this shit)
bar 2: soul into flame/sold it for fame = basic play off of the whole sold your soul to the devil fables in music. huffin a mean g-note = harmonica
bar 3: master on the monica =play off the last bar, also a reference to monica from friends
bar 4: not much to say pretty self explanitory
bar 5: same as bar 4
bar 10: addicted/every line you blow = he fucks up every line he writes just like if he was addicted to coke
bar 11: foul me, off the balcony, free throw...basketball reference
bar 12: feet swole from sitting, jerking off = beating pole. tadpole isnt good but has been claiming hes the best and genos not even good enough to beat him so the only way he could even do that is by jerking off...beating his pole....
most of those were self explanatory but fuck it there it is

Geno Wrote:
This Enimee faggot ain't worth my energy spazzin',
He pretends to be badass, but lacks the passion and talent,
If I'm locking his threads, he starts sobbing upset
His purse, he's gotten it wet, so he goes and drops me a threat,
He hits me back like he's got an itch to rap,
Fuck that, I'll come to Fort Mill and I'ma kick your ass,
I seen a photo of this kid, he's lookin' kinda buff,
He's posing with 5 other guys that he's tryna fuck,
His buddy to the left is in position for a reach-around,
Come to think of it Spyder, why's this fag in Geno's round?!
You coulda tackled him, or Tadpole coulda licked his nuts,
I'd recommend D-GAF but you know that he don't give a fuck,
Ugh, I've taken Enimee to 12 bars, on the verge of the 13th,
Made it to the next one and the virgin disturbs me,
He falls on the curb, knees in the dirt and it irks me,
Come on you little motherfucker, we just had your skirt cleaned!
He turns, and I get kinda creeped out when "he lips this"..
"Let me lick dick", whoa! Pause, that is sick shit,
I guess that's why this kid's alias is "Tripple Dot",
'Cause he goes around telling men he wants to lick their cock,
Then they get surprised, faint, as he then applies some paint,
Writes "property of Maryland" on their tender thighs and waist
He puts his head down for you and I world-wide,
As he blows his head off suckin' dick on the Sui-cide Girls site,

- He used to live in Maryland, but he lives in Fort Mill now
- He likes the Suicide Girls website
- He PM'd me when I locked his thread and wanted to battle
- The picture I'm talking about exists, but I'm not gonna post it
- Tripple Dot is his Facebook name. "He lips this" (ellipsis) and "pause" also go with this for wordplay if you missed it.

I think that's it for personals that need explaining.

Good luck in the battle Enimee, all in fun.

[Enimee]

My man actually did homework your verse made me lol the whole time gooood shit for real

[EmTV]

Geno >

[Spyder]

3 Punches - Enimee
3 Personals - Geno
2 Multies - Enimee (close)
1 Flow - Geno
1 Structure - Geno


So by break down for me its a tie, but im not like that so...

En, i though your punches were decent, i didnt catch everything the first time. when u pm'd me it i hadnt caught on to all the g.e.n.o lines in your 4th bar, thats nice. the Monica line wasnt evident until i read the expo, things in the verse should be in quotes or whatever so that people can tell. Some things being so complex through off the flow. nothing was too personal here but you got the punches cat.

Geno, not alot of hard hitting things here, though you did a nice job with the personals. the only reason i gave him multies was he was using a little more complex multies and you had one line(second line) that didnt rhyme that well. only reason he got that, i didnt want to give a category a tie.
those multies however did give you flow, and your structure lined up better.

so in all, i am a biased guy to punches, i think they should be more dominant in battles, while personals are more effective in disses.
so i have to give it to Enimee :y:

great and close battle though

[Eedee]

No way Geno doesn't win for multis.

And Enimee's g.e.n.o. lines didn't make any sense...

[tadpole25]

Geno wins this.

Personals and punches goes to Geno. Enimee had some good punches as well, but Geno outdid him with personals..

Flow structure and multis goes to Eminee because his vocabulary was more unique and that made a difference. Geno had a great flow/structure/multi too.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Both of you are not judges, so no1curr about what ya'll think. They both were dope.

[Eedee]

^ You're not a judge. No1curr what you think.

[PAINKILLƎR]

lol ok

who's the other judge?

[Eedee]

Well, DGAF voted but Spyder deleted his vote for some reason. I don't understand why, DGAF is in the judge pool.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Spyder abusing his power just kidding (not really)

Well I can fill in if there is no other judge

[Spyder]

There are set judges

[Eedee]

Like the judges in the judge pool?

You never "set" the judges in the Reprisal thread... so how was he to know? I'm sure he wouldn't have wasted the time typing up his votes if he knew they didn't count.

[Spyder]

I'm sure that wasted time was five seconds
Settle down

[Eedee]

I'm settled, I just think it's a bit bullshit.

But it's your tourney and your rules, so nothing I can do lol
Just make sure you lay out the rules ahead of time so shit like this doesn't happen.