Geno vs. Trimss (Geno wins)

[Trimss]

Claiming you're part of some kind of lyrical trinity (1)
Don't you think you're full of a synical vanity?
Just look at me, this is how the pinnacle has to be
you're just a disturbing sick dog who's serving the big god (2)
see me losing? it's odd, you gotta see through Vinnie Paz's eyes (3)
I'm a king in hell and you're a servant in paradise (4)
Give me a saberlight and your hair i'll slice, (5)
Nobody's on Geno's side, cuz' you look like Selena's wife (6)

No need to explain it but shit.

1) You already know, the lyrical trinity.. creative writing..
2) I'm the real god, fuck the trinity
3) Vinnie Paz already said he got distorted eyes.
4) Pun on his album, plus i'm the king of hell and he ain't no trinity, just a slave in paradise.
5) talking backwards + personal pun about his hair (lol read that somewhere)
6) Hair = Bieber, Geno's side=Genocide=Geno

I just finished that up, rushed the last lines.


Nice Piece Geno, kinda liked your line about hop.

[Trimss]

Well it's the only personal I knew about you and since I enjoy Fack from times to times i didn't want to attack you on that.

[Trimss]

I wanted to do something like:

"Your opponent is good and your luck's not,
now i only got one thing to say, boom, nuts shot."

but couldn't place it. lmao.

[Trimss]

Aha man, to be fair with you I pulled some rhymes off my ass. i think it's the very first time i drop a full 4 syllables rhyme.

Thanks! I'll keep improving.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

[3] Punchlines = Tie [Geno (relaxed and less pretentious)] [Trimss (liked the vinnie paz punch)]
[3] Personals = Geno (the hop mention)
[2] Multis = Geno
[1] Flow = Geno (way better)
[1] Structure = Tie
[1] Vocab/Complex = Trimss
[1] Other = aint no shit doe!

winner = Geno

[Trimss]

Kinda good feedbacks for my only second battle (the first one was so bad it makes me laugh.)
Now everyone has to vote for me!!

[Suicide]

3 Punchlines = Trimss
3 Personals = Geno
2 Multis = Geno
1 Flow = Geno
1 Structure = Trimss
1 Vocab/Complex = Trimss
1 Other = N/A

6-5 for Geno.

[Trimss]

I guess we can stop now, you got your three votes lol! Congratulations Geno. I Still have to improve!

[Drug.Ballad]

Looks like im too late to vote. Both had really good verses and Trimss, you need to battle more

[Enimee]

yeah geno took this, but keep at it trimss