Tadpole25 vs Flyingmonkey10

[tadpole25]

Mutually agreed rules:
3 rounds, consisting of a 8-12 line verse from each of us
48 hr response time
I start

Fire, gotcha sweatin' , regrettin' the rhymes you settin
Retire, i'm suggestin it's best if u let Rekk step in
Wait, bitch hold up, if i get a hold of of what you wrote up
i'll take the page and spray it ablaze with my flamethrowa
It mustve never occurred me, how much fucked up you'll be
If you try to mess with me, lotta bitches having sex with me
like i'm a celebrity, ask anyone's sister they heard of me
Boy you never learn, you see
Yall gon get burns, And the burns'll be third degree
if you a live that'll be luckily, cuz im tokin' , i'm on one
I'm like a broken condom
Cuz nobody wanna fuck with me

[B.A.D.]

looking forward for this

[flyingmonkey10]

you about fire, thinkin you hot, youze a liar, that's why i'ma set your pants on fire
try to take shots at me, i'ma slit your throat and you think i won't?
just for that, i'll rip your tongue out through it, that's called a columbian necktie, stylish for a dead guy
death is the least of my worries, you talk mad shit like gossip
which makes you a bitch, cuz only bitches talk and drop shits like a pigeon, good riddances, i should just mop the floor with you, so get down before i snap your neck like a jedi mind trick
i'ma beat you like i beat my own dick like he owes me money, that's a line from chappelle i kinda used and i think that's fucking funny,
even with filler lines, i'm dope like coke lines
tadpole tries to lyrically lick shots, but the only shit you be lickin is cock, scratch that, you ain't a fag, you're just a bitch pmsing cuz i'm the shit and you just mad

[tadpole25]

you think you HOT / cuz you rhymed the word "fire" twice
You're not / bitch-talk again / I'll put your head / inside a vice
Snap your neck with pliers / like I'm cutting wires
I gut drivers / who fuck up my ride /passing-by / my drive-byers

I'll be a hot dripping / cock-licking / clit-flicking / wrist-slitting / whore on all fours
Before / I act black / and release a wack track / like yours / how bout that?

You say you'll mop the floors with me / I'm not the force, b / I ain't with you / I'm against you
Only floor you'll mop is at Denny's / who your friends be? / what your friends do?
If I offend you / It's cuz I only dispense the truth
Mack 10's I shoot / While i'm rappin in the booth

[flyingmonkey10]

i'ma bash you and trash you like yesterdays's news
Today's headliner is tadpole gets lyrically abused
oh didn't you hear? you're yesterday's news
You are a whack track, so just do errybody a favor, wait on them train tracks
Your rhymes are softer than a passive bitch, learn to how to go apeshit
faggot, i'll drop a CD on you and make it a hit record, get it? nah forget it
monkey gonna squash the frog, whoops, i meant fraud,
thinkin you can rip me into shreds, i'll stick you into a wood chipper, and skull fuck your head
there's nothing wrong with my part time job at denny's, while you're on the street fishin for pennies
my niggaz got my back, while yours are on the street corner sucking dick for crack
offend me? nigga please, the only way is if you smoke trees, cuz that's a waste of weed 

[tadpole25]

Monkey talkin shit / I stare at that gun over there / Till your brain spattered on the table / ya'll slumped in a chair / Even without a weapon / I'm betting / you'll hide under the stairs / You can't beat in me a fight / no wonder your scared / beating you lyrically / or literally / which hurt more? / Ya come to yo moms crib / knock on the door / for that whore / she answer naked in my polo shirt / with her skirt on the floor / but first i'll strike till I burst your spinal cord / and steal your cream /that treat / your vaginal warts / My crew had an itch on they dick/ And now you'll find it's yours / Cuz they fucked yo bitch / like they ain't see a condom before / Your a bastard child / Like "I don't want him, he's yours" /

Ya'll best not make rap a career / ya'll a fag and a queer
you best be in a tranny mag / like drag of the year

[flyingmonkey10]

stop frontin like you're the shit, sad midget fuck, you ain't that tall
your penis so small that when you pee you piss on your balls
your rhymes are too predictable, while mine train like goku
i'm undefeatable, like poo, you'll always be number 2
bash the fam, but stay on track, i'm the son of sam like big L
your life is gonna be shattered by a legend without the gun shells
so what if i'm a bastard? i'll keep it classy like ol' dirty
i'ma ace your rhymes, jack your queen & break yo heart with a diamond shard
while your life is dealt with a deck of jokers, mine is full of plenty women & strip poker

i already told you in round one, death is the least of my worries
you're done, so stop actin retarded like you're on bath salts before some more unnecessary assault

[tadpole25]

Alright. Thanks for the battle, man. I had fun.

Now, it's time for the members on this site to vote.

And we'll see which one of us earns more points

[flyingmonkey10]

cheers bro, that was cray

[Mr.DGAF]

I feel like this shoulda been voted on already. I'll go tadpole with the W, if you guys want a full breakdown I can do so.

[Mr.DGAF]

Aight, full breakdown:

I dunno how you guys want this to go point wise, I'm just gonna go with who I thought took each of the basic categories and why.


(3) Punchlines- flyingmonkey10
(3) Personals- tie
(2) Multies- tadpole25
(1) Flow-tadpole25
(1) Structure- tadpole25
(1) Vocab/Complex -tie

So it's tadpole (4), flyingmonkey (3)

This was close, I felt both of you could have done a bit better though. Personal's were essentially non-existant, I guess that's understandable seeing as tadpole's a new member. That doesn't leave too much room for any good dirt to use on the other haha. I felt like tapdole came harder after each round, he did a decent job flipping some stuff from flyingmonkey's verse. The bath saults punch was my favorite of the battle, so I voted flyingmonkey that way. Neither verse was too crazy with complexity, and I thought tadpole's was structured better which also made it flow a bit better. Hope that helps you guys

[tadpole25]

thanks for the honest criticism man

[Vettori]

I enjoyed tadpoles structure better, I read it and was able to follow along perfectly.
flying monkey you need to work on your multis.
gotta think a little deeper then what you were. Get creative. But try to remain making sense.
Id say Tadpole won this one, forgive me for not getting to far into depth.

keep doing things like this & youll get much better even hit up the creative writing sections Multi cypher at the top of the page. Its good practice.

[Le Tunisien]

i vote tadpole

[Spyder]

do u guys want Le's vote broken down or is this a KO for tadpole