Bigray vs Painkiller

[PAINKILLƎR]

How did you know my name?

[PAINKILLƎR]

Nah it's not my name... just a really bad joke m8.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Word, I agree.

[Spyder]

Not sure who put this in great battles.

Mods wouldn't, so whoever made the thread don't open threads in here.
They're made to be moved in here. Not created

[PAINKILLƎR]

Can you vote please?

[Spyder]

I'll vote soon.

All battles are to be made in the main thread though

[SliK]

Alright judges just vote already

(5) Punchlines - painkiller
(3) Personals - Bigray
(3) Multies/Rhymes - painkiller
(3) Flow - painkiller
(2) Structure - bigray
(1) Vocab/Complex - tie
Pain wins 12 - 6

Bigray I'm really not sure why you chose to make punchlines worth 5 and then come hard with personals. I think you were a victim of your own marking criteria.. Flow definitely doesn't need to be 3, multies could have been 2...

Anyway both verses were decent and enjoyable and it was much closer than the scores reflect but off that marking criteria I have to give it to Pain. Congrats dude.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thanks for voting Slik.

[Spyder]

hmm for me

punches - ray
personals - pk
multies - pk
flow - ray
vocab - n/a
structure - ray

the punches could have gone either way for me, this was def. more a personal battle. i liked the personals in here. i just thought PK had some better ones that i could pick up on easier, and thought they hit a little harder.
the play on my name was alright, but hes never acutally ducked me, if he had it would have been a lot better.
everything else is just kinda there.
but i liked the personals on this one and its closer than the breakdown seems

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thank you Spyder and Geno for voting. What's the vote count so far? Is Spyder's vote a tie or what?

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thanks man, you did good. Good battle.

[12characters]

Well... fuck lol.

Fuck it, I'm posting anyways.

(5) Punchlines - Payne, the internet gangster line was dope as fuck lol.
Plus, Ray had some weird ones like the "Go ahead drop a diss, but first let me take a piss, amigo" and "I’ll eat him quick like twix than shit smoke more cannabis". They sound like rambles tbh.

(3) Personals - Ray, though Payne had some good ones too. You both had personal disses and forum persona disses.
All in all though, I think Ray's about the Desperadoes was the most effective.

(3) Multies/Rhymes - Payne.
Those awkward switch ups can hurt you sometimes, Ray. I mean, I think I can see what you're going for (like some of the old east coast shit), but those only really work in audio tbh.

(3) Flow - Payne, it's always hard for me in text tbh, but I had to stretch the words more with Ray's.

(2) Structure - Payne, even though Payne had some run ons in the beginning, Ray's rhymes were totally misaligned.

(1) Vocab/Complex - Payne, because the way Ray worded some of his lines was really awkward. Plus, Payne's sounded more believable like;

'You avoided Slik, trying to take the easy way out
And he's afraid of Spyders, haha I'm teasin' Ray, ouch'

sounded a lot better and smoother than

'When they names changed to green it wasn’t a dream
You lost all your self esteem, Canada Pure and Eedee
They don’t even acknowledge you they fled the scene
Geno and Slik, both can suck a dick close your lips geez!'

[12characters]

Even though he already won, Payne was who got my vote.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thanks 12 for your well thought out vote.

I win, that's cool. Thanks to all the judges again and my opponent too. Good battle.