by PAINKILLƎR » Mar 27th, '13, 22:09
Punchlines - Geno
Ray you have a lot of punchlines some were cool but some were just poorly written and made little to no sense. Geno's were more solid and easier to understand.
Personals - Geno
Ray I know that you believe that studio leaks beats any of Geno's personals but it doesn't really, the way it was written seemed casual it lacked execution. Maybe if you would have gone more into detail and delivered it better it would have made a difference. If you battle more in the future keep this in mind.
Multis - Geno
More rhymes, more multis. Ray some of rhymes didn't rhyme completely and where you did well the were basic 1 syllable rhymes.
Flow - Geno
Geno's superior rhyming made his easy to flow. Ray you had a lot of rhymes but they disorganized and you switching up schemes made it hard to follow.
Structure - Geno
Vocab/comp. - Geno
Ray you had alright vocab just try to step it up a bit next time.