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Postby HAYZI » Sep 12th, '05, 01:11

just relax and dont think too hard i often dont even think of the next line and just write a line that i like and then think of the next when i get there cos the more you think often the harder it can be for me anywayz

nehoo im offski see you later babe keep writin im likin it and ill give you more tips and stuff tomorrowX :wink:
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 12th, '05, 01:22

HAYZI wrote:and v-dog thats the first time i saw you keystyle
you lost all you respect now i kno you cant freestyle
:lol:



oh dis mothafuckaz dead


kid why dance WITH A GIMIC, Ill'll slice hayzi FOR A LIVING, chop ya head off and put my fist down ya throat so I can shake HANDS WITH YA SPIRT!!/
Ima teach this Pussy a 'lesson' like PORN CLASS'S, check my Format, and you aint gotta tell me the "Weather" for me to put you in "FOUR-CASTS"(forecast)!!/
i run with some CRUEL FOLK, your lungs get BRUISED,-HOPE that I dont blast cuz you've always Been a dick like the NEW POPE!!/
V-Dog's a faust legend and a SICK SAVAGE, shit this PRICKS AVERAGE, the way I see it is that hayzi wont Make it out alive like a MIS-CARRIAGE!!/
Your a FAKING THUG, you can get SCRAPED AND HUNG,Im WASTIN CHUMS and this rap was a Fucking Breeze like RAPING LUNGS!!/
Ima make the STABS ENDLESS, when its beef he just RUNS ON like a DRAGGED SENTENCE, cuz Ima hurt yo feelings(fillings) like a BAD DENTIST!!/
Give ya a QUICK SLICE YA READY??.. my SICK LINES IS DEADLY n have this bitch RIPPED LIKE CONFETTI!!/
Im packin spits WELL INTENSE, my attack is hot i got HELL OFFENCE n ya look classy cuz against me ya'll have ELAGANCE!!/
GRAB THIS AXE FROM the BACK THEN SLAP SOME this WACK N TRASH THUG, ya betta? im pleased to say ill beat ya cuz SAD ITS FACT SON!!/ (satisfaction)
Hit ya CHEST WIT KNIVES i no this fag likes 2 MESS WIT GUYS but im FRESH WIT VIBES that attack and PRESS UR EYES!!/ (pressurize)
I have RHYMES N TEXT ill use NINES N TECHS 2 snap ya SPINE N NECK kid's have to check ya watch for the TIME OF DEATH!!/
Ma winnin STREAK IS STARTING ya is WEAK NOT WHORTY and 'ima leave ya fall back' like some GEEKS AT PARTIES!!/
Make the CORE OF YA ARM BURST in FOURS WIT THE SHARDS BURNT n 'rip ya skin n take the bone s(bonus)' as REWARD FOR MY HARD WORK!!/

fuck wit me HAYZI
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 12th, '05, 01:29

This Geeks RELEASIN SOME WEAKENED BARS dat Feeds me REASON TO SQUEEZE & SPARK; I'll Fill HAYZI's Head wid Cartridges like Im CLEANIN-A-V.C.R.!!/
You jus SPEAK CRAP DAT'S BASIC while I SKEET GATS & SPRAY SHIT; My heats like Mushroom Highs bitch, after THREE CAPS YA WASTED!!/
Ill's RHYMES MANGLE CHEAP VETS and LINES RAMBLE BLEAK SPITS; Ma punches Stick The Sin like a TRIANGLE DEFENSE!!/
Ma verse is CUNNING AND SICKKER so I'm SONNIN SCRIPTS QUICKER; coz only time hayzi is Dangerous, is when RUNNIN WIT SCISSORS!!/
Ya FICKLE IM SAVAGE BLASTIN, you aint tough i blaze slugs, ya more-than-fake and never "court-a-case" like CRIPPLES IN BAGGAGE HANDLING!!/
I feel Relief-In-Ya-Squeals as I RETORT & SMASH BONES Plus you couldnt be Squeezed-Into-A-Deal if you was BORN IN A CRACK HOME!!/
I CLEAVE CHESTS to GRIEVE FLESH; Its Nothin-Good when I SEEM STRESSED DEFEAT DIS BITCH??? BELIEVE YES I Fuckin Wood (would) like TREE SEX!!/


FUCK WIT V-DOG
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 12th, '05, 01:31

alyssa wrote:lol
that was the bestest rhyme ever tho hunneh i wuved it ^_^
or the bestest i ever herd anyways, ur so smartful with words ;)
i rote a lil one but i aint gonna post it after that one itll jus b embarasin :P


oh thanks for sayin that was the bestest rhyme uve heard, thanks for sayin
im so smarful with words :wink: and dont feel embarissed, c'mon post urs up :D :wink:
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 12th, '05, 01:34

alyssa wrote:i closed the lil windo i was ritin it in so its losted :P
anyways laterz hun ;) xxx


oh, damnit, u dont have it anymore??
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 12th, '05, 12:36

i was jus fuckin wit you v-dog but its blindingly obvious that all your shit is already written cos when you did keystyle it was a completely different style and you didnt use no capitals

keystyle means typin (rhymes) of the top of your head
and your ryhme was wicked youll be battlin wendy in no time :wink:
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 12th, '05, 19:59

HAYZI wrote:i was jus fuckin wit you v-dog but its blindingly obvious that all your shit is already written cos when you did keystyle it was a completely different style and you didnt use no capitals



ok dick, how da fuck u gon say dat my shit was already written, u fuckin stupid
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Postby Tomega » Sep 12th, '05, 20:04

V-DogDaMenace wrote:
HAYZI wrote:i was jus fuckin wit you v-dog but its blindingly obvious that all your shit is already written cos when you did keystyle it was a completely different style and you didnt use no capitals



ok dick, how da fuck u gon say dat my shit was already written, u fuckin stupid


C'mon guys, no fight here! respect each other for skills, believes, and love for hiphop. HAYZI, i dont think v-dog stole his lyrics. Keep it friendly..
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 12th, '05, 22:25

you gotta have a sparrin partner tho and we need a bitch fite round here!!! :lol:
i saw your song btw it was fuckin good did you realy write your bit? it shows how good my teachin is :wink:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 12th, '05, 22:28

are we still giving lessons?
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Postby HAYZI » Sep 12th, '05, 22:32

No! your lines are perfect i cant believe thats all you! i told you we'd have you spittin bars in no time im realy impressed :wink:
you should have a battle wit sum1 for a laugh i realy think you should battle darjan it would be jokes as you say purty pleez!!!!
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Postby Darjan333 » Sep 12th, '05, 22:34

haha....
Now really, i will lose cuz every1 love alyssa!!
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 12th, '05, 22:36

nah i think shell kick your ass :lol: :wink:
shes the next big thing round here
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 12th, '05, 22:40

go on darjan we kno you luv a battle
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Postby Darjan333 » Sep 12th, '05, 22:41

Ok,You make rules and make a section,cuz I am now going to sleep and you spit first...i will reply on it tommorow
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