[LEAGUE] Mr.DGAF 1-3 MENZO

[B.A.D.]

Mr. DGAF:
This is a battle across countries, it's a rapping canadian
A foreign alien, who has to try and hide behind an Alieus
There's no escaping this, I'm aiming for the jugular like dracula
A straight up battle rapper who will stab you with a spatula
Flip my rhymes like gymanstics, I'm running the course of time
So keep in mind that half your ego don't equal a fourth of mine
You're fortune's dying tonight, this battle's a slap in the face
It's a matter of taste deciding who has mastered this race
But I'm a jack of all traits, an aviator with a heart of diamonds
A hand that's crafted by fate, you're just a spark on a lighter
This is art you're defying, I think I hear the flat line
Not to mention you get less action than Whitney's crack pipe
So listen one last time, Cause I could pencil in some insults
But I'll keep it simple, keep writing your raps with a stencil, Menzo

MENZO:
"This may seem a little awkward, alright? But I'm not gonna lie
For the longest of times when you started to write, I thought that you might
Be synonymous guys with Man1x and it's honestly like I'm bombin' you twice
Sorry G, I'm doing your job for tonight - have you heard of the quote
"Kill two birds with one stone"? It's kinda like that, but it's murder by flow
Now let's reserve all the jokes and talk 'bout what we gon' expect
Like, me and Geno have sex which sets our Ego's erect? Question
How you gonna throttle this site's lyricists from the top, dawg
When your spirit lifts and practically backflips when we drop songs
Plus the feed you leave me is longer than any piece you've released
And speakin' of these, let's have a look at our collaboration
I'mma throw facts to face, kid, cuz you seem to forget
Sayin' I had dope imagination, there's no need to pretend
You lost your memory, I have it saved in via message
Receivin' blank stares, a ghost yet no one peaks-a-boo
So don't give an F, cuz degrading is what teachers do"

[Spyder]

alright remember any vote counts, but people on the judge lists ultimately count more,
but most of you are on that list so...

(30) Personals - Menzo (20) DGAF (10)
(20) Punchlines - Menzo (10) DGAF (5)
(20) Technique - Menzo (20) DGAF (15)
(10) Flow - Menzo (15) DGAF (15)
(10) Structure - Menzo (5) DGAF (15)
(10) Vocab/Complex - Menzo (5) DGAF (5)

Menzo - 75
DGAF - 55




Menzo, wasnt your best. i dont look at you as a battler though so, gotta step up your punch game really. i dont like Ax's point system so your lucky punches arnt viewed as top here. so come on your personals and you should stay a float.

DGAF i mean i really didnt see anything great, sorry man you had the basic concept of multies and such but at this level you need high vocab and not as a predictable scheme. gotta work that punch game out too. and Menz is an old member you should have no prob getting personals.


EDIT: please keep all chit-chat to the chat thread, only votes will remain in the threads

[Enimee]

>>>>>>>>>>>>>Menzo >>>>>>>>MR.DGAF
pers.>>>>>>>>(20)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(10)
punches>>>>>>(5)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(15)
tech >>>>>>>>>(2)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(18)
flow>>>>>>>>>>(5)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(5)
structure>>>>>>(0)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(10)
vocab/com.>>>>(6)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(4)
total >>>>>>>>(38)>>>>>>>>>>>>>(62)



wow that looks alot more one sided then it was...
Look both of yall had great verses if you ask me and the only thing that really edged dgaf for me was his ability to stay on point with the flow and use of multis within his rhyme scheme throughout his verse.. it was consistent and really solid

fav. bar of dgaf was

"But I'm a jack of all traits, an aviator with a heart of diamonds
A hand that's crafted by fate, you're just a spark on a lighter"

phew this is over there heads material right here and it kept pace with the rest of your verse great work

menzo if you would have thrown in a couple other hard hitting punches you probably would of got that cat. the best thing you did was that name flip

"Receivin' blank stares, a ghost yet no one peaks-a-boo
So don't give an F, cuz degrading is what teachers do"

like i said you had some great ideas man but it just seemed as though DGAF peiced his together a little bit better in his verse then you did, he connected his bars more fluently and practically flawless structure


GREAT BATTLE YOU 2

[Trimss]

(30) Personals - 20 Menzo 10 Mr.Dgaf
(20) Punchlines - 15 Menzo 5 Mr.Dgaf
(20) Technique - 15 DGAF 5 Menzo
(10) Flow - DGAF 6 Dgaf 4 Menzo
(10) Structure - DGAF 7 Dgaf - 3 Menzo
(10) Vocab/Complex - Tie 5/5

Menzo : 52
Dgaf: 48


It was really close, but Menzo won this for me.

There were some dope lines, by both of you. Let me quote them:

Plus the feed you leave me is longer than any piece you've released

That line was like a big wooooow. Haha.

So keep in mind that half your ego don't equal a fourth of mine

This one is really great too lmao.


Great battle guys.


EDIT: I VOTED MENZO.

[B.A.D.]

Trimss, Enimee & Spyder, please fix your votes, I can't tell who you voted for, thats why I made the points system

[Spyder]

i used the points system, i didnt give each battler some points in each cat. thats silly
the cat should go to one person, so i gave them all to them

[Trimss]

updated.