[LEAGUE] ENIMEE - MENZO (open)

by **B.A.D.** » Mar 10th, '12, 11:20

ENIMEE
i had some people tell me i fell off, now enimee is back
a loss is a loss, but that comeback motivation, damn i needed that
so just to keep it laxed ima heat the wax and release some some facts
see his ego's maxed, he likes men-zo he must be a bleeding fag
the way he reads is raps is proly mean and mad, but hes just so simple
screamin to himself, like "YO BUMP UP THE TEMPO IM FUCKING MENZO
and thats just to reiterate on your sex preferences, my next message is
who told you you could beat me? was it geno, that infectious kid
who runs around not knowin that we know he'll never have sex again?
did spyder, crawl up beside yah all close tell you im fallin off and gettin tired?
i jus been pullin punches given false hope while listnin to the eye of the tiger
plannin a vacation with amarathine all the way to tim buck tu
if you leave hurry and arrive buy noon, shit M, u can get fucked too
just bring a ripped up shoe filled with spit cum and lube
sike let me quit dumbin dude or else i might slip up and lose
to a chef in "hells kitchin" that cant ever seem to whip up some food

MENZO
If you look back to '06, you was lackin' focus
Battle raps with no diss but you strived to inherit feed
But when shown some feedback you just overreact
Throwin' theatrics, crying like a little dweeb
The guts to jump the gun? Ya structure fuckin sucks
This one's for Pac above, as I "Ride On Our Enimees"
My punches ain't the best, ain't one to take offense
Yet you rush to your defense cuz yours "fly over everything"?
You 're a hypocritical cunt and an illiterate fuck
Clickin' the shift button won't help capitalize on anything
Eight 'n a half bars don't equate what's asked for
What a way to act hard! Fag, I'm twice the better emcee
Your most is two pages fed, homie you're placed amiss
Ignorin' to take the hint your rhymes are pathetic, please
Remained shit to this day, you stay'n relivin' history
Ain't ways to shift your fate, when lying at your defeat

by **Mr.DGAF** » Mar 11th, '12, 20:32

(30) Personals ---------Enimee 15 Menzo 20
(20) Punchlines --------Enimee 15 Menzo 15
(20) Technique --------Enimee 20 Menzo 10
(10) Flow ---------------Enimee 10 Menzo 10
(10) Structure --------- Enimee 10 Menzo 10
(10) Vocab/Complex --Enimee 5 Menzo 5

Enimee 75
Menzo 70

Close battle honestly, but I think Enimee had the better verse. Not surprising, I've seen some of E's battles and knew that last week wasn't the best he could come with. Menzo held tight though, using his last battle was nice, especially the "Fly over everything" line. Rhyme wise, I thought Menzo had the creativity, but I think Enimee executed better. I liked Enimee's name flip better too. Good battle guys.

by **Mr.DGAF** » Mar 11th, '12, 21:20

Haha, just saying man, I don't remember seeing it before, which is why I though it was :coolthumb:

by **Amaranthine** » Mar 18th, '12, 00:56

ROFL. I just noticed this. Props on fitting my name into that, Enimee.

by **Amaranthine** » Mar 18th, '12, 02:42

Geno wrote:
Amaranthine wrote:ROFL. I just noticed this. Props on fitting my name into that, Enimee.

Well this is awkward for Menzo LOL

Menzo didn't mention me. It's a long word, it takes effort. But he didn't spell it right, and Menzo did, so...

by **Man1x** » Mar 18th, '12, 02:52

(30) Personals ---------Enimee 20 Menzo 25
(20) Punchlines --------Enimee 15 Menzo 10
(20) Technique --------Enimee 10 Menzo 20
(10) Flow ---------------Enimee 5 Menzo 10
(10) Structure --------- Enimee 10 Menzo 10
(10) Vocab/Complex --Enimee 5 Menzo 5

Enimee - 65
Menzo - 80

I felt Menzo came much harder in this battle but Enimee, you stepped up your game big time from that horrible verse the other week ago and you had the hardest hitting line but to bad you didn't have more of them to support yourself and gain a win. Menzo didn't body you but I feel you could have to him if you came with a little more intensity and focus. However, Menzo won all technicals hands down, no debate. His flow & structure were so much tighter than yours. Good job Menzo, you also had more hard hitting personals then Enimee but didn't best him in punchlines IMO (only category you lost in). Good battle.

by **Enimee** » Mar 18th, '12, 20:29

j/s i spelt it wrong for a reason

lol and thnx everyone for the votes and feedback, good drop menz'

by **Enimee** » Mar 18th, '12, 20:36

ur not sposed to ask me that gee...wtf

jus get on ur bars for our battle dont worry bout my reasons

oh and anyone get my tampon reference?

by **C-Game** » Mar 24th, '12, 14:00

hey nice to see Enimee still doing it .. weirdly enough i didnt see any complex rhymes on both ends.. Menzo had some good punchlines.. really enjoyed the readin.. brings back memories of the ol days

by **Enimee** » Mar 24th, '12, 22:26

C-Game wrote:hey nice to see Enimee still doing it .. weirdly enough i didnt see any complex rhymes on both ends.. Menzo had some good punchlines.. really enjoyed the readin.. brings back memories of the ol days