eedee vs bigray (ransom)

[Spyder]

Beat

Sit down, here's a story 'bout a boy and his dick,
Actually, read THIS, it's a Freudian slip.
There's more to this shit, he's engorged on a prick,
Ain't no way that's on his mind just for his lame diss.
You don't have half a brain, come to think of it,
I find it laughable you called yourself unpredictable.
You rolled the dice on that one, it's game-time,
This lame guy probably thinks the syllables in his name rhyme.
You get No Love if you liked Wayne's verse,
Like Marshall, I'll murk you, you and Wayne in the same hearse.
You worship me, dude, do your knees hurt?
I'll slap this dick-rider upside his head till he seizures.
I breathe words, you just choke on the end-rhymes,
This religious fuck is a joke like the "end-times"
I'm gonna inflict sick pain on this bigray,
I suck? Then why did you PM me for all my mixtapes?
Then you give me a "Warning", I'm trembling now,
Where's your canines, dawg? You need to denture your mouth?
You lame bloke, you think your life is all pimped up,
I won't resort to gay jokes cuz he IS one.
I don't need to go all-out, jeez, SliK,
Since battling bigray anyway is a free win.
Your Super tag-team got bounced, your partner knows the pain,
I'ma 'son' this big ray, but first I'll close the Shades.

beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utfjL7em8bc

Got em’ stressed and obsessed, he goin’ all Stan dumb
Betta’ come blessed you under house arrest call it Ransom
Nuttin’ left? You already addressed I smoke too much sess
Your raps four at best, what eva’ he says I could give a fuck less
Ur subliminal’s won’t get you out of this ur a bitch who tried to dismiss
And got all pissed ready to slit his own wrist, on my shit list don’t call this a diss
He puts out Epiphany with zero versatility, E D’s theory of relativity
That cover, no creativity and lacks simplicity like your inconsistency
How this kid gonna’ be a rappa’? When we rarely make it here in Canada
Don’t botha’ movin’ to Australia with mdemaz you’ll stay starvin’ like in Alaska
I repeat everything you do is weak, let’s keep this one a little discreet
Remember last week, you put out ur first beat? Sorry but that shits obsolete
Born with no feelings, I detest you and bitches which is….
Wait hold on let me fix this, let me give you six stitches my blade itches
I’m a fuckin’ liar I don’t hate all bitches, Mary Jane my addiction
She always there for me, she ain’t fake like your science fiction
First time he got the right answer, I’ll give you fuckin’ cancer cunt
I may drive by at night n blast you in my Lancer, while smokin’ a fat blunt
Once I drop this diss, you’ll need a lifetime supply of Nyquil,
I don’t need a witness bitch, he won’t be able to rest call this my pill
I’m a King what I say goes, remember? Made you write 48 bars
You’re like one of bigray’s hoes your bait too late and you trust corny stars
I think I forgot to address somethin’ it’s in my jacket no! Wait that’s a maggot
Yeah you carry a lot of baggage its quite simple E D you’re a straight up faggot

Line 5: When Spyder dropped Ransom E D tried to avoid the battle by showing Spyder that we already battled me viewtopic.php?f=26&t=156038

Line 7, 8 – Epiphany is E D’s latest EP he dropped

Line 9, 10 – E D wants to move to Australia with mdemaz to pursue a rap career

Line 11, 12 – E D dropped his first beat on tr last week viewtopic.php?f=69&t=156300

Line 16 – E D is an Atheist, so I took a shot at Science in other words it is fake

Line 17 – E D called me a cunt and said I give him cancer viewtopic.php?f=26&t=156038

Line 19, 20 – In this thread viewtopic.php?f=29&t=156174&p=2155491#p2155491 E D said he is gonna take Nyquil and he cant sleep

Line 21 , 22 – In our previous battle we had, E D called me out for a battle of 16 or 24 lines but I said 48 lines and he listened, one of E D’s interests is astronomy

Line 24 – In our last battle I was accused of calling E D a faggot too many times so I never mentioned it in this battle bed ended it off calling him a faggot.

PS: I keep calling Eedee E D because he had once asked me not too call him E D.

[SliK]

"PS: I keep calling Eedee E D because he had once asked me not too call him E D."
Lol

This was a good battle. Bigray I'm not kidding you've improved a lot over the last 3-6 months (however long it has been). Nice use of multis dude. Eedee you had some good lines too.

This was a much better battle than your last one.

[tadpole25]

Bigray did improve, but Eedee's verse wins this one, in my eyes.

I've seen better battles, I've seen worse.

[Spyder]

3 punches - really idk, eedee i guess
3 personals - gotta say ray
2 mutlies - eedee
1 flow - eedee
1 structure - eedee
1 vocab/complex - ray

this was closer than the breakdown shows. and actually i like rays more, but by the cat breakdowns eedee gets it.
eedee, you come with anything personal more than what ive seen already touched on. his end rhymes and what not. you talk about his end rhymes, then that "unpredictable" line doesnt fit anywhere... none of your punches really hit hard. but i guess you edged it out.
your multies were simple, but he broke a lot of multies so you got this and the flow.

ray, your def improving man. a lot of your multies have an extra syllable in them and some end rhymes still dont match up. Canada and Alaska dont rhyme even though they and with the same syllable...
your punches some didnt makes sense. you dissed him for his style not being simplistic... thats a good thing though.
your personals were better, more of them and harder hitting. so good job on that. nothing amazing, but def got that category.

eedee wins it. but ray def improved

[Eedee]

Thanks for the vote, Spyder.

As for the "unpredictable" punch, it was basically "Oh you're unpredictable? Too bad you probably think the syllables in your name rhyme", I was playing on his weaknesses.

[Spyder]

Needs votes

[Mr.DGAF]

3 punches - Eedee
3 personals - bigray
2 mutlies - Eedee
1 flow - Eedee
1 structure - tie
1 vocab/complex - bigray

7-5 Eedee

Kind of closer than I expected. Pimp, I think you coulda come a tad harder but you know I thought you had some dope lines. There were a few I really liked, the name rhyme and the Wayne line were nice. A solid verse, I know you were running out if stuff to say since you guys battled recently. It was a solid verse mane, not your greatest but it was still pretty good.

Bigray this was definitely an improvement. There were a few lines where you had nice rhymes and a good idea but didnt execute. You've got some solid plans but there's never really any punches to them, this basically gave Eedee the category. Your rhymes were actually a lot better than usual. Still, Eedee's a practiced writer so he had a fairly easy time using multies along with his punch. Just work on punches man, if you can intertwine that with the rhyming and all you had this would be really really tough to decide.

[Spyder]

2-1 win on eedee

good battle guys