CrashBand vs Superman

[CrashBand]

NB: Judges should judge before reading the thread because there is biased dissecting going on from both parties.

[superman11]

Edit: Here it is. Continuation of the beef from the cypher thread. viewtopic.php?f=24&t=18951&start=2730

2000 post plus, your a has been and your flow sucks,
Straight off a short bus, can't imagine why you'd even show up.
As I fasten this bomb around you so you feel what it's like to blow up,
Never slow up, my rhymes beam through the ceiling,
Show a faggot from New Zealand how to hurt a feeling.
Your girl recognize me cause she sees me when she's dreaming
Cause I'm the man of em, shit girl, like I might care,
After I slaughter your guy here, your next my dear,
As I tear a hole through em, now you'll see me in your nightmares.
But you I'll spare, now back to this bum called CrashBand,
Some fat Stan that i gotta body bag and dump in a trash can.
It only took less than 10 minutes for me to ignite ya,
Where's your bars? Gotta scroll through pages to find ya.
Got you like "Why'd I have to say his name in the cypher?"
You a writer? posting there cause you need someone to feed off of,
Now I'm feasting on you, It's awful, flows haunting.
Got me hostile now I'm standing over you taunting,
Til I catch my breath from laughing than I'm stomping
you out so now think twice before you run your mouth.
Cause like I said from day 1 when you called me out,
I just showed you what this rap shit is all about.

[CrashBand]

Beat

He’s the type of stan nigga who opens rap genius up to read aloud with
The type of stan nigga, you can’t write a fucking thing about
The type of stan nigga, you regret saying things around
Cos he goes home, thinks about it, and writes a hundred schemes about it
Real talk, 2 months pay on that Call of Duty package
For the limited 5th edition Survival all exclusive pamphlet
With the lyrics on the front, and them pictures on the back
Highlighting all the rhymes to show Em’s diff’rent from the pack
At parties ladies love him when he says ‘cunt’ in many ways
He gets giggles, but he wonders why it’s never second base
It’s "I cunt", he then explains, but he’s still so hard pressed
Maybe Superman can score, but we all know Clark kent
Another week, another party, and everyone’s invited
It’s the biggest of the year, but Clarky’s undecided
Cos he wants to stay home, do his usual status quo
Speakers full blast, in the mirror yelling SUPERMAN THAT HOE!!!

[CrashBand]

Who's up fo judging dis ish

[PAINKILLƎR]

IN

[CrashBand]

You can use the usual score thing if you want. Or you can just judge you won and justify it (still taking into account categories if you want).

[PAINKILLƎR]

Got it.

[superman11]

Lol nice. that was pretty funny at parts.

It's up fellas. Judge away.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Really good shit guys. CrashBands verse was very well put together playing off of supermans name and him being a big stan throughout the whole thing unlike superman who wasn't really as direct to CrashBand besides mentioning he's from New Zealand, except when you mentioned the cypher that was actually really nice but that's about it.

Both flowed well to me, Crash's was really smooth, clean rhyming. Superman with lots and consistent rhyming as well.

Nothing else much stood out. Crash actually going at and playing off of superman was more personal and clever than supermans aimless bars. CrashBands piece seems like the clear cut winner to me.

Great battle tho

[superman11]

Thanks Painkiller.

I disagree on some parts though, not just being a prick cause you picked CrashBand, his was cool.

But he only really went at me in the last 5 bars, with my name and all. The rest was generic towards a Stan, which we all here.

I feel like I went at him throughout in certain parts. The first line, the New Z. line, play off his name a bit.

Here touched on him never posting in a while in C.W., except for in the cypher thread, and him going at me in the cypher.

Where's your bars? Gotta scroll through pages to find ya.
Got you like "Why'd I have to say his name in the cypher?"
You a writer? posting there cause you need someone to feed off of,

And here when I mention a line from the cypher beef.

Cause like I said from day 1 when you called me out,
I just showed you what this rap shit is all about.

Also thought mine had a lot of multis compared to his. Just my thoughts. All in good fun though.

Can we get at least two more judges and determine a winner?

[CrashBand]

Your multis aint near mine son

and you are a stan lol. don't act like you don't know the words to Survival

[superman11]

Your multis aint near mine son

and you are a stan lol.

We all are brah. And what multis?

[CrashBand]

@bigray Use any bruv. Or just justify your decision.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Uh I did mention the lines where you did actually go at him. As for rhyming, Crash's multis were nice and schemes were cleaner, more natural too, he wasn't rhyming for the sake of rhyming and he still came up on top imo of course.

I'm just one judge, 2 left m8.

[superman11]

Uh I did mention the lines where you did actually go at him. As for rhyming, Crash's multis were nice and schemes were cleaner, more natural too, he wasn't rhyming for the sake of rhyming and he still came up on top imo of course.

I'm just one judge, 2 left m8.

I know, Im just saying that was throughout whereas he only really goes at me in the last 5. And I must not know what a multi is than...