some short shit

[spitz]

ok, i needa no if my shit is good or not, plz no that im kinda new to the rap game

in my eyes this whole rap -game is sowed-/
i shove a grenade in yo mouth n watch ya -brain explode-/
im ravonous n rabid n im -thirstin blood-/
that'll leave you upside down head -first in mud-/
im ill enough to be thrown off a mountain n -still live-/
n i stay jazzy n fresh with out jeff n -will smith-/
cuz i think i was put here to make -noise n cuss-/
cuz im sicker than michael jackson shoppin at -toys r us-/

some short shit, if u aint get the jazzy line, dj "jazzy" jeff was the dj for will smith, back then known as the "fresh" prince, hope that clears that up, if i cood get some feedback....well thanks cuz i got nuthin 2 give

[emememinem]

fuck yer man that shit was awesome man... you gotta battle someone... good work man later

[stealth]

not to bad bro

[mbmatt11]

pretty good stuff man