Illicit vs. McZu (VOTE)

[*Illicit*]

Good luck homie.

Yo I'm a DEVILS SPAWN I rule this land you STAND UPON I move you your my USELESS PAWN I'm a playa let me put my UNDERARMOR ON/ Yo we HEAD to HEAD it's FEED or be FED I've been sleeping on you bout time to get a new BED. /Your Afraid of my focus,its aggressive and CLEAR. Your taking steps back from me as I get NEAR. I keep my composure or so it APPEARS, you won't ever see me slip up, you won't ever see a TEAR(cry).So now that I have found your FEAR no longer are you equal or considered a PEER/. Now I've got the UPPERHAND ON YOU, not what YOU PLANNED ON.. DO you UNDERSTAND that i'm ABOVE YOU TOO bitch I STAND ON YOU. I'm higher now than EVER the things that I ENDEAVOUR, make me stronger ,wiser and oh so CLEVER, bitch I'm gonna pull the LEVER to turn this wack MC off FOREVER. Illicit.

Yo it wrapped it. When I wrote it I was 8 lines the lines were just too long I guess so it wrapped he text around.

[mcZu]

I’m about to kill a kid called Illicit, his shit? Nobody is feeling it, I’ll be shredding Ill, behold..
Illicit lives alone at home, with no electricity, nor heat, that’s why he’s begging for Cole
Illicit wished he was celibate, ‘cause I wish Illicit get’s fucked by ill simplistic sickkids in all his holes
While Mr. Fantastic drastically and elastically puts his penis around Illicit’s neck in his attic
And I’ll be screaming you just got served hard like getting subpoenas ‘cause he’s just common at it
Just ask Serena.. when I’ll be seeing ya I’ll be feeding ya a vault just to make you feel safe
Yes, he’s unlawful, referring to his name, his raps are linguistic improperly formed and still fake
Son lost too, intestines drip, shit, properly scorched, his face in the-grass-see, he a real Drake

[*Illicit*]

VOTE?

[classthe_king]

It's to hard to read yours Illicit.

Mine goes to Zu

[*Illicit*]

It's to hard to read yours Illicit.

Mine goes to Zu

come on your suppose to use the voting system and analyze the verses.. compare them on punches.. etc..

you can't just look at it and be like.. its too hard to read.. SKIP.

[classthe_king]

His punches beat yours obviously, but Zu wins on the fact that it took me about 5 minutes to sit there and read yours. If you really want me to break it down I will.

[*Illicit*]

His punches beat yours obviously, but Zu wins on the fact that it took me about 5 minutes to sit there and read yours. If you really want me to break it down I will.

lol its not my fault it took you 5 minutes to read it? did it use too many big words for you? Its not that hard dog.

[classthe_king]

Yeah, your's was SO complicated compared to zu's

[*Illicit*]

Yeah, your's was SO complicated compared to zu's

appreciate the opinion. move along man

[Jaz]

Could at least put shit in bar format..

I went through both a few times, but it's really hard to understand either of your flows or structure due to the paragraph format.. So I can't vote.


Edit: I figured out that Zu's is in bar format, but I really don't see lines that long fitting a bar, so fuck it.

[mcZu]

Thanks for voting. About the structure and flow, well, see it as being spat in double-time. Best way to describe it. Starts off double-paced, and at the end of each line it get's a bit slower.