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ok....i know im the best dont test me cuz ill slit ur throat and youll be wishin for a blessin i know u aint gonna beat me in this beacause i spit from the heart if you had the mind of mines man youll be so lost you'd wish u'd had a compass dont be scared cuz ill knok yo A## out in a lyrical battle man challening Q is a suicidel disaster dont hate on me cuz im tight at this rap sh## just be quiet let the beat hum to yo noggin let it just relax ya mind man F&&k this QB go be rockin shady aftermath in a few yrs just watch out ill be the one turning GUNOT to GUNIT dont be hating cuz this S&&t is legit ill put tha GAME to rest like that 50 cent diss ...lol....im so tired of people saying they better than me...just take a seat ill sing to ya maybe a lil marvin gaye huh?...wtf did i just say...,marvin gaye?...im loosin my mind on the internet whole up this s&&t aint copyrighted let me shutup before sombody write it
i'm not gonna vote but Q, you should format your verse differently so its easier to read. paragraph form makes it confusing and if you put it in the form that memyself used it will be a lot easy to read and see what you're rhyming.
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai I still rap better than you.
Q it ent a gud idea to cum up and say I'm the best etc etc.....cuz wen sum1 steps on u, u will just look silly....however ur rhymes were aite, just structure them in lines like thomas said