The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

FORDIE vs V-dog-da-menace

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Who won this Battle??

FORDIE
6
40%
V-dog-da-menace
9
60%
 
Total votes : 15

FORDIE vs V-dog-da-menace

Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 01:26

O.k here`s the rules:

Minimum 8 bars (16 lines)
First to 4 votes wins,
All votes have to be explained or they don`t count.

Good luck V-Dog
Image
.......http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=34661......
^^Read The Download Section Rules!!^^
User avatar
4D
Under The Influence
Under The Influence
 
Posts: 4864
Joined: May 17th, '05, 10:58
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Postby Sunni » Aug 21st, '05, 01:35

Where's the battle?
Sunni
 

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 02:33

Dis My Shit Peep Dis Out


I'll THROW THE CHALK and flames at this man and blow ya brains in ya hands and tell you to HOLD YA THOUGHTS, If the gat is TUCKED UP..BLAST'EM" I'm bigga-than-you- fuck ya squad I'll get rid-of-ya-crew when I BUST THE MAGNUM, I'll BLAZE THROUGH YOU when I'm rattlin-heat" you battlin-me?" what a good WEY TO LOSE, I'm crazy and LOCO BROTHER" I'll pop-ya-arms and I'm on top-of -"burns" like CO CO BUTTER,
WRECK AND GRIND LAME HERBS" With a punch I'll turn-ya-teeth and I'm fighting "Burn"-with-ease" like EXERCISE TRAINERS, My GUN PLAY MERK FOUL MEN" girls dont like you at all" only time they feel "Burn" is when they listen to KANYE'S WORK OUT PLAN, Releasin fire and HEAT FLYIN IN MORE CRUEL" ur Shit! you might as well just quit" cus "Mic" is known for RETIRIN FOR BULL, (Michael Jordan) I MIGHT LEAVE YOU SCORCHED" slaughter-and-kick-men its logical facts that in order-to-get-wins "MIC" NEED TO FORCE, I SCROOL WITH PIPES V'ill conTROLL HIS LIFE" I got you on lock" cus everytime I'm on stage I'm HOLDIN MIC, I'll let THESE KNIVES SLICE..POKE THE KID" they fags so I'm quick to BEAT "MIC" LIKE JOSEPH DID.(Michael Jackson).


It Was Ight but lets see his shit
Image
User avatar
V-DogDaMenace
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 935
Joined: Aug 19th, '05, 14:59
Location: New York, NY

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 02:34

oh shit i wrote more den 8 bars (16 lines) my bad, fuck wit write as much
as i wrote ight?????????????????............................................
:lol: :lol: 8) :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :D :) :o :( :lol: 8) :D :) :( :o :lol: 8) :D :) :( :o :lol: :lol: :lol: 8) :wink: :) :D :o :( :lol: 8) :D :) :o :lol: 8)
Image
User avatar
V-DogDaMenace
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 935
Joined: Aug 19th, '05, 14:59
Location: New York, NY

Nice

Postby Vettori » Aug 21st, '05, 02:40

That was pimp yo, Nice work,
give that a 9 playa,
:o :o :o

PIMP
User avatar
Vettori
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1232
Joined: Aug 20th, '05, 17:45
Location: Hamilton Ontario
Gender: Male

Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 21st, '05, 05:08

this should be good. :twisted:
User avatar
ThomasAguanis
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 5857
Joined: Jun 22nd, '05, 22:14
Location: New Jersey
Gender: Male

Postby DragonzEdge » Aug 21st, '05, 06:48

this is getting my dick harder than math
DragonzEdge
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 201
Joined: Jun 16th, '05, 22:57

Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 10:59

V-Dog ya lil fuckin faggit, That ALL YA GOT?,
bet ya hear that a lot, chicks be like "How SMALL`S YA COCK?"
Street bitches laughin at ya 3 inches, ya should CALL A DOC
nO BALLS OR COCK(Ha ha), ask him to inject some meat and INSTALL SOME ROCKS!
I MAUL UR DROPS, cos your verses versus mine is PLAIN SHIT
MY BRAINS SICK, i spit this shit in ten seconds, had TO RETAIN SPIT,
cos my MAIN SCRIPT`D blind ya, ur hand wud have a CAIN GRIPPED,
PAIN DRIPS from your eyes in the FORM OF BLOOD when i STORM N FLOOD
The page, take da stage and unleash the rage on this INFORMANT THUG,
DORMANT SLUGS lodged lyrically in your MINDSCAPE, it`s MINDRAPE
When my RHYME ATE you quicker than cops bitchin bout CRIME-RATE,
BLIND DATE`S you`re only hope of MEETIN A BITCH,
Repugnant ugly bastard prayin she`s not SEEING A STITCH
SPEAKIN A WHICH, ur gonna end up bloodied and DEEP IN A DITCH,
TEACHIN ME TIPS? I got a freakish wee itch, but ya gay rap CAN`T SCRATCH ME
Ur a gay buff who plays tough but ya lyrical gats CAN`T BLAST ME
I BLAST BACK GHASTLY, You`re firin blanks on all levels LITERALLY & LYRICALLY
You`ll be known as NON-BEST when i win this CONTEST INEXPLICABLY
you`re TEXT TICKLE ME, i laugh at ya half assed DISS AT ME
You`re PISSED AT ME cos i`ve got the TALENT to PROVIDE A CHALLENGE
I DIVIDE YOUR LARYNX, when i give you suicidal TENDENCIES,
TENDONS SEIZED when i cut ya like BREAD WID EASE,
I SPREAD DISEASE when i let the sickness flow like THE BEST EMCEES,
I REST AT EASE knowin ur defeated, V-DOG-DA-MENACE
Fleed off ta Venice ta SKI, JOG AND TENNIS,
Sentence: death penalty, U Can`t beat me, can`t get NEAR ME COP ON
No one fucks with FORDIE on TrSHADY.COM
Image
.......http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=34661......
^^Read The Download Section Rules!!^^
User avatar
4D
Under The Influence
Under The Influence
 
Posts: 4864
Joined: May 17th, '05, 10:58
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 11:04

O.k let`s get some votes in here 8)

Props on ur diss V-Dog!!
Image
.......http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=34661......
^^Read The Download Section Rules!!^^
User avatar
4D
Under The Influence
Under The Influence
 
Posts: 4864
Joined: May 17th, '05, 10:58
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Postby Darjan333 » Aug 21st, '05, 11:23

I vote 4 fordie.
...Better rhymes...
...better disses...
User avatar
Darjan333
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 717
Joined: Jul 3rd, '05, 12:36
Location: Croatia

Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 11:27

DARJAN333 wrote:I vote 4 fordie.
...Better rhymes...
...better disses...


Thank you Darjan, 1-0 to me.

Faith 99, ur vote doesn`t count, cos i hadn`t put my verse up yet!!
Image
.......http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=34661......
^^Read The Download Section Rules!!^^
User avatar
4D
Under The Influence
Under The Influence
 
Posts: 4864
Joined: May 17th, '05, 10:58
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Postby DaILLesSt147 » Aug 21st, '05, 14:54

nice battle boys, but i think V-DogDaMenace came out with the win
DaILLesSt147
Closet Cleaner
Closet Cleaner
 
Posts: 9
Joined: Aug 21st, '05, 14:52

Postby 4D » Aug 21st, '05, 14:57

DaILLesSt147 wrote:nice battle boys, but i think V-DogDaMenace came out with the win


O.k aight, 1-1 it is.
Image
.......http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=34661......
^^Read The Download Section Rules!!^^
User avatar
4D
Under The Influence
Under The Influence
 
Posts: 4864
Joined: May 17th, '05, 10:58
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Postby oneofthenicestever » Aug 21st, '05, 15:05

crazy shit FORDIE, no hate but v-dogdamenace was the winner of this match
but ur reeaalllyyyy good, but its just that v-dogdamenace is better no hate homie
oneofthenicestever
Closet Cleaner
Closet Cleaner
 
Posts: 2
Joined: Aug 21st, '05, 15:02

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 15:28

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha i won! nice shit FORDIE it shouldve
been a closer battle, but i won 5-1 but really i won 4-1 nice shit FORDIE
ur good, but its obvious im better lol j/k
Image
User avatar
V-DogDaMenace
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 935
Joined: Aug 19th, '05, 14:59
Location: New York, NY

Next

Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users