When u have to use something none of us know about, that doesn't bode well and def won't get u the kind of response u were hoping for
IMO
And just as a disclaimer, I'm sure you'll try to wriggle your way out of being wrong Class. I'm fully aware there is some redneck border portrol group who call themselves "minutemen" or something, and you'll try to say that's what you were referring to. No. Not gonna work. If that was the case, that'd be even more pathetic as that's even more reaching and retarded.
TheEminemShow wrote:@FreeSpeech
You should write more
FreeSpeech wrote:I said...And just as a disclaimer, I'm sure you'll try to wriggle your way out of being wrong Class. I'm fully aware there is some redneck border portrol group who call themselves "minutemen" or something, and you'll try to say that's what you were referring to. No. Not gonna work. If that was the case, that'd be even more pathetic as that's even more reaching and retarded.
THEN you said...
You're so damn stupid. That is the stupidest punchline, it would have been better if you HAD meant Revolutionary War. I clearly got it from my post above, but what a stupid reference. Like, referencing random shit is just retarded, that was completely irrellevant to your verse and insanely forced. Here's a punchline like yours (not wordplay though) I can pull out of my ass and it fucking sucks:
Class' sexuality's uncertain, like the Huntsman PAC
I got him stuttering "umm damn, Free slays me"TheEminemShow wrote:@FreeSpeech
You should write more
Haha sarcasm? That Girls verse was just jacking Em's rhymes haha
classthe_king wrote:lolz. Considering I thought of the punchline in Current Events class when we were studying immigration I would say it's not a stupid thing nobody's never heard of. SORRY I'm not Drake and used dumbed down punches. He's much more fit for someone like you, you shouldn't listen to me.
FreeSpeech wrote:I didn't say no one's heard of it, I obviously had given I predicted you would use that as an excuse. I said it's a stupid irrelevant punchline, it's wack. My punchline was the exct same, a current event. You're not smart because you can namedrop random political shit, I'd rather hear a mediocre Drake punch that get's the point across rather than hearing you force some retarded reference to something you heard about in school.
And have you listened to yourself? You have the worst fucking delivery/nerdy voice/boring lyrics. I obviously shouldn't listen to you, no one should.
And L-O-L at you text battling Geno but not responding after I murdered you. And yes, I murdered you. Make ny excuse you want, you obviously have time/are willing to write a text diss.
FreeSpeech wrote:I said...And just as a disclaimer, I'm sure you'll try to wriggle your way out of being wrong Class. I'm fully aware there is some redneck border portrol group who call themselves "minutemen" or something, and you'll try to say that's what you were referring to. No. Not gonna work. If that was the case, that'd be even more pathetic as that's even more reaching and retarded.
THEN you said...
You're so damn stupid. That is the stupidest punchline, it would have been better if you HAD meant Revolutionary War. I clearly got it from my post above, but what a stupid reference. Like, referencing random shit is just retarded, that was completely irrellevant to your verse and insanely forced. Here's a punchline like yours (not wordplay though) I can pull out of my ass and it fucking sucks:
Class' sexuality's uncertain, like the Huntsman PAC
I got him stuttering "umm damn, Free slays me"TheEminemShow wrote:@FreeSpeech
You should write more
Haha sarcasm? That Girls verse was just jacking Em's rhymes haha
classthe_king wrote:FreeSpeech wrote:I didn't say no one's heard of it, I obviously had given I predicted you would use that as an excuse. I said it's a stupid irrelevant punchline, it's wack. My punchline was the exct same, a current event. You're not smart because you can namedrop random political shit, I'd rather hear a mediocre Drake punch that get's the point across rather than hearing you force some retarded reference to something you heard about in school.
Really? You think I used that line as a way to drop a random political thing? Are you fucking retarded? I was making the play on borderline garbage, and that was just the way to execute itAnd have you listened to yourself? You have the worst fucking delivery/nerdy voice/boring lyrics. I obviously shouldn't listen to you, no one should.
LolzAnd L-O-L at you text battling Geno but not responding after I murdered you. And yes, I murdered you. Make ny excuse you want, you obviously have time/are willing to write a text diss.
Yes...because the 15 minutes it took to write this 8 line verse is EXTREMELY similar to writing an entire diss track especially since I was in ap exam week.
Hop off my nuts dude, it's getting really, really annoying.
TheEminemShow wrote:
No sarcasm, i know it was the Girls verse. I think your good at writting, and noticed you werent in the rap tourney, you should post in this section more
FreeSpeech wrote:-No, it's a reference to a political thing dumbshit, i.e. it's completely irrelevant in a diss. And it's obscure enough a lot of people wouldn't know it, yet you aren't any smarter or more clever for referencing it, so it fails. Face it, it's a stupid fucking punchline. And yes, I know that you were making a play on borderline garbage, that's why it's fucking stupid, it's ridiculously forced. "like minute men's litter" that's not even a thing, moron. It's a stupid, stupid line. You could have made that punchline numerous ways:
"Like a map in the trash..."
"Like litter in the Korean DMR..."
"Like Great Wall refuse..."
^Each is completely stupid, just like yours.
-You honestly think your music is remotely good? Give me a yes or no answer: Do you think you make songs that sound good to most underground rap fans? Not good as in "hey nice try champ, you're really improving!" but "damn, I've never heard this kid before but I'mma put his shit on my iPod".
Maybe wrote:Your flow was only slightly short of phenomenal. Your lyrics were solid, and the emotion was surprisingly good. I'm actually surprised how good you've become... You use to be all lyrics, but now you're backing up the lyricism with high grade vocals.
None the less, amazing work. This is going on the iPod and now I want more from you... so, hit me up with a PM and some links when you get a minute.
-I'm not on your nuts whatsoever. In case you didn't notice, you mentioned me here without me doing anything as an excuse for sucking. It's like you want me to be on your nuts and hate you, you miss it when I don't insult you so you just made it up that I did. Admittedly, I mess with you more than most other people. That's cuz your delusional reactions are hilarious, where everyone get's the fact that your a complete pig-looking retard except you.
Yah-hah wrote:NWO & Yah-hah vs class and cole make it happen
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.
10/10
C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous.
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
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