Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

[xxTrigger1989xx]

Relapse 2 would have been his masterpiece, I think. Sucks we'll never hear it, maybe when he's dead.

[K Reidy]

Relapse 2 would have been more pointless songs with that awful accents. Rhymes and flow aren't enough to make a song good

[Amaranthine]

Wooow. You guys are awesome for doing this, I love seeing all Em's rhymes, it amazes me. I remember an MTV interview from TES era where Em was like, "I spend hours on these rhymes, and usually the only ones the average listener will notice are the ones I spend ten minutes on."

So major props for pointing out the ones he spent hours on.

I'd like to see Stay Wide Awake, Seduction or So Bad.

[Master Chief]

I'll tell you what you missed.

Cold Wind Blows - Recovery

Cause I hate a pussy
Fucking way to push me

You didn't highlight the cause/fuck rhyme. That's all I believe.

Deja Vu - Relapse

Asanine isn't highlighted and that rhymes with the whole mastermind/glass of wine rhyme scheme. And self-induce is meant to rhyme with twelve noon even though the syllables don't quite match.

Music Box - Relapse:Refill

Jack The Ripp(er)
Crackers with

Time has come
Tie her up

Mother's make (up)
Naked and run (It's an inverse multi)

&

(Satan) worshippin', you didn't highlight that one and it goes with the horse whipping/mortician rhyme scheme.

No Apologies - Eminem Presents: Re-Up

You didn't highlight "don't know me" which goes with the cold shoulders/both frozen rhyme scheme.

&

Wolves clothing
Pushed don't be

You didn't highlight "pushed" or "wolves" which are part of the rhymes.

Ridaz - Recovery

You didn't highlight "Emergency" which is part of the heard this beat/murder scene rhyme scheme.

You didn't highlight "(ass) whipping, okay" which is part of the dissipates/(re)ciprocate rhyme scheme.

You didn't highlight "now do you still" which part of the outta you chill/found me a thrill rhyme scheme. And also "how do you feel".

That's it from me lol.

I would like you guys to do Welcome 2 Hell, Living Proof, Buffalo Bill and Stay Wide Awake. Would be very interesting. Good job guys

[Sam.]

this is really good man i fucking love to see them multis

[Innovation]

this is really good man i fucking love to see them multis

Haha cheers mate. We'll be doing all the requests as soon as possible.

[Sam.]

buffalo bill
the kids
marshall mathers

would be nice for you and us when you do this

[Devil'sAdvocate]

great work.

[Alex2012]

Thanks

[Innovation]

Thanks

No worries, bro!

damn, that's the beautiful result of team efforts.

nice shit, enjoyed checking them out, great work.

Cheers mate! I loved looking through them when other people did it, too! Hopefully we can show just how complex Em's rhyming is. There's no way he's fallen off in regards to rhyming. Some of the schemes are just plain amazing.

I've just finished his verse on Patiently Waiting. One word - amazing. It'll be posted soon! Just going through final checks.

[Innovation]

^^Patiently Waiting verse is one of my favorite Eminem verses of all time, looking forward to see that !

Dude I actually thought the verse was "meh" before. But Em's rhyming on that is ridiculous. I'm near certain this was a 2002 verse. If this was a 2003 verse, I wish Eminem recorded Encore at the same time. The rhyming would have been crazy and another potential classic to his collection.

[momentsgolden]

Wow, thanx guys. Appreciate the effort.. truly helpful.

Request though:- Welcome to Hell

[Innovation]

Wow, thanx guys. Appreciate the effort.. truly helpful.

Request though:- Welcome to Hell

This will be posted along with The Kids and Em's verse on Patiently Waiting today!

[Sam.]

Wow, thanx guys. Appreciate the effort.. truly helpful.

Request though:- Welcome to Hell

This will be posted along with The Kids and Em's verse on Patiently Waiting today!

viewtopic.php?p=1701978#p1701978

[Innovation]

Wow, thanx guys. Appreciate the effort.. truly helpful.

Request though:- Welcome to Hell

This will be posted along with The Kids and Em's verse on Patiently Waiting today!

viewtopic.php?p=1701978#p1701978

The Kids - done
Buffalo Bill - I'll leave that for Menzo
Marshall Mathers - I'll probably do this today

Patiently Waiting has been posted, my bad. The Kids is next to be posted as I finished that. Marshall Mathers is next.